As a drop of rain hit me,
Right on my lip,
I was numb.
Right there I froze.
It was like a drop of acid,
Corrosive, burning my lips.
Oh, how it reminded me,
Of our very first kiss.
How the rain approved,
As we sealed the deal.
The downpour began,
Drenching me from head to toe.
Every drop was caustic,
Burning me to the very core,
I was in a purgatory,
Of memories of you and me.
I couldn’t move a step,
Nor find a shelter,
As all of it flashed before my eyes,
Prickling pain that never ends.
That midnight in your terrace,
How we danced in the rain,
And those hot cups of coffee,
As we enjoyed the monsoon,
And how we made love,
As pitter-patter sang to us,
Oh, how I loved the rain
Just a little less than you.
Now, every drop stings,
With memories of me and you.
Featured image by: Aleksandar Pasaric from Pexels
Wonderful poem dear…
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Now 109 followers.
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Yep why not..
Tell me when and where?
I’m in Nepal. Where are you?
In india 😀😀
Nicee… Where in India?
Haryana, rohtak
Nicee
My 2-3 friend are from nepal.
Do u know hindi?
I do… I stayed in India for 4 years 😂
Where?
I am from haryana..
I was in Bangalore 😬
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Now what’s about the party 🎊…
I don’t know
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What is ur real name??
I’m Shreya
Nyc name 😍😍
I have a college mate name shreya
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What r you studying right now??
Nothing 🤗
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Thode der me bat krke aaisa lg rha h ki i know u very well…😊
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Do u have any social media handler…
I have insta. Look for WILD SCARED CRAZY. 🤗
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Pitter patter raindrops!!
( I hear thunder. Oh, don’t you?)
Beautiful btw. 😁
I did hear thunder, a yesterday! 😛😛😛
Thanks! ♥️
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So beautiful ✨✍️👌 I wish it rains here now😉 Happy Weekend ✨💐
Thank you so much, dear. 💕Where are you from?
I’m from Kanniyakumari, lives in Hot Chennai🥵. It’s better today. Still hot!!
Nicee… I hope it rains too! 💕💕
Yes, I hope too, weather dept’s predicting it’s going to rain! Usually that will never happen as predicted, either machine or predictor getting old😂.🙄. Let’s see 😉
Haha… Let’s see! Let me know if it rain, I’ll stay here being happy for you. 😂😂😂
Good work
Thank you so much!!!❤️❤️❤️ How have you been lately?
🤔🤔🤔 didn’t get you?
Get what?
Second sentence
Nope!
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Very moving poem. Beautifully penned, Shreya
Thank you so much, Shweta! 💕💕♥️♥️💘💘❤️❤️ So glad you liked it! 💓😍😍🥰🥰🥰
AWESOME POEM Shreya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH, Eshal!!! 💓💓💓💓❤️❤️❤️❤️
No problem Shreya💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
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Lovely poem as always! 👏🏼👏🏼
Thank you so much, dear! 💕💕💕
Anytime 😊
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Wonderful.. 😍😍😍
I love the rain!!!!!!!
Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️
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Refreshing and nostalgic one Shreya 😍❤️
🙈🙈🙈🙈 So glad you liked it Tushara! Thanks a bunch! 💓💓💓💓💓🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘
So beautiful!
Thank you so much, Harsh! ❤️❤️❤️
“Oh how I loved the rain, Just a little less than you” such a romantic line💞, it was raining here just yesterday but there was nothing so romantic about it😂, it was furious.
Haha … Romance is all in the mind, dear. You could be walking in the middle of a dessert and still make it seem romantic… 😛😛😛😛 Like I miss you more than every grain of sand here… 😂😂😂
Exceptional poem, little one! You stretch a moment in the rain to reveal all the emotions of a well remembered love. I love the form and flow. Soft and gentle as the rain, but leaving you completely soaked with the feelings. Well done, Shreya! 🦄❤😘
Thank you so much, Brad! 🙈🙈🙈 Your words always leave me with extra good vibes to fuel my writing. 🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘💓💓💓♥️♥️♥️
Someone got attacked by acid rain!
Haha… Not so nice rain! 😂😂
Amazing poem Shreya! I am learning a lot about poetry from bloggers such as you! Great going, keep it up 🙌
Thank you so much, Uzzawal! I’m humbled by your appreciation. Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️
Wonderful 💕
Thank you, Era! ♥️
Anytime, Shreya 💞💞💕💕
Take care, have a good day ahead
You too dear. Have a beautiful day! 💕💕
So much emotion. Loved the imagery. Gave me a theatrical effect. Lively!
Thank you so much, dear! So glad you like it. 💕💕💕
The words blend so nicely.
Thank you so much, Chole! 💕💕
There is something so romantic about the rain. Kissing and more … as shared raindrops douse two lovers. 🤗🤗😘💖
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We have rain here. I could so connect to everything Shreya!
It’s beautiful to read here♥️
Thanks a million, Rashmi. How have you been? 💕💕💕
I am good! How are you?
I’m good too! 🤗🤗😘😘❤️❤️💕💕
It’s raining here Shreya 🤩
And look what I am reading 💙💙💙💙
Haha… I hope the rain is giving you all the nice feelings and not this one… 😂😂😂♥️♥️♥️
The mention of acid rain takes me back to the 90s lol
Beautifully written poem.
Why the 90s?
I remember hearing about acid rain all the time in school back then. It was considered a big ecological issue back then I guess.
While we’re in school, everything is so important. After that, everything still stays important, but the bills become more important. 😛
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Nice stuff…
Thank you so much, Diana! ♥️