The Pit Of Solitude

An eerie silence has trapped me,
All I can hear is my own echo.
Into a pit of darkness,
I feel the gravity pull me.
“Can anyone hear me?” I scream.
“Can anyone hear me ?” It reverberates.
“Heyy,” I scream once again.
It again echoes, my futile attempt.
I feel so lonely and cold in here.
Does anyone know, Iโ€™m not there?
But in this world, does anyone care?
Somebody does, somebody must,
I keep repeating it on and on,
In desperation, I cling to hope.
The eerie silence teases me,
The darkness tries to embrace me.
“Nobody cares,” they tell me,
Again, and again, they remind me.
“I do,” I finally retort.
One person, I truly trust.

Featured image by: Mikke Strandberg from Pixabay

121 thoughts on “The Pit Of Solitude

  1. เคธเคพเคงเค• says:

    Spectacular splendid stunning writing… But meri post ap nhi padte ๐Ÿ˜ that’s your wish. ๐Ÿ˜„. Keep writing stay blessed.

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      1. เคธเคพเคงเค• says:

        It’s your wish friend.. apko pasnd nhi aayi hogi meri writing. Jo pasnd aati h log whi to padhte hai.. it’s okay. Aap jaldi thek ho jaoge. Stay blessed and safe.

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Yeah, mommy is always there. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž And papa too! ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

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      1. Tushara Olivia says:

        That’s cool. I meant the ending lines ought to whom. “I do,โ€ I finally retort.
        One person, I truly trust.” In these lines and I came to many conclusion for these lines. So just for clarification.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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      2. WildHeart says:

        I meant the same… It’s nice we think the same way! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

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  2. H.R Phoenix, Author says:

    Awesome….
    You diddd ittt again! You captured the topic perfectly and your writing is out of this world

    โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
    Shreya, want some advice from the person that you’re always calling awesome which is a lie ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„ – Write a book and I’ll buy itttttttt!!!!!! Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please.

    Wow, that took a long time to write! What was I saying again? Oh yeah, write that bookkkkkk!!!!!

    Xxxx,
    Your forever friend who doesn’t like it when you compliment her ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚,
    Phoenix ๐Ÿ’– ๐Ÿ’– ๐Ÿ’– ๐Ÿ’–

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Why do you do this to me??? Replies to comments like this can only be a super duper tight hug, not virtual one…. ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’žโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
      And about the book, I’m too fickle minded… I did start a book after you told me to… I wrote two pages and, few days later, it didn’t feel like a nice book. So, no book. But I’ll definitely write one, and dedicate it to you! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ

      Xxxx,
      Your biggest fan and a forever friend!
      ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

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      1. H.R Phoenix, Author says:

        โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

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      2. WildHeart says:

        ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Haha Komal… This is fictional… I know you care and I care for you… You just make my day so so so much better… Love you to the moon and back! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

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  3. Chetna Mittal says:

    So beautiful and strong metaphor,Shreya!!
    I was literally feeling as if you were stuck in the pit and I could feel the desperateness you had,and at the end I was like..THANKS GOD!!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’ซ๐Ÿ’ซ
    Great work!๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’•

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Your words make me fly high, Chetna. Thank you so much! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’žโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ Have a beautiful day! ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’

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  4. Anushk@ says:

    It’s beautiful Shreyaโœจ
    The truth is many are going to hurt you. You just got to find the ones worth suffering for..!!

    Damn amazing..!!โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Anushka! So glad you liked it. No, loved it! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ You always make my day so so so so so much better! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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  5. Madhuri Sakhamuri says:

    Heyo,shreya how can you do this every single time…I’m out of words…seriously…Its amazing dear…I feel when no one cares anything about us is when we realise our own importance….Keep writing Shreya…Love Love:)

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Madhuri. I don’t know how do I thank you. You make me feel so so so happy. Loads of love to you. I hope you’re staying safe and well. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ

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      1. WildHeart says:

        I’m perfectly perfect. And super duper happy cause you keep showering me with so much love. ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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  6. Navneet Kumar says:

    Awesome yr
    เคœเคฌ เคญเฅ€ เคฒเคฟเค–เคคเฅ€ เคนเฅ‹ เค•เคฎเคพเคฒ เค•เคพ เคฒเคฟเค–เคคเฅ€ เคนเฅ‹

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    1. WildHeart says:

      ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ Thank you so much, Navneet! ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’žโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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      1. Navneet Kumar says:

        เค†เคชเค•เฅ‹ เคชเฅเคฐเฅ‡เคฐเคฃเคพ เค•เคนเคพเค‚ เคธเฅ‡ เคฎเคฟเคฒเคคเฅ€ เคนเฅˆ
        เค‡เคคเคจเฅ€ เค–เฅ‚เคฌเคธเฅ‚เคฐเคค เคฐเคšเคจเคพ เค•เฅ‡ เคฒเคฟเค

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      2. Navneet Kumar says:

        เคเค• เคฐเคพเคœเคผ เค•เฅ€ เคฌเคพเคค เคฌเคคเคพเคŠเค‚, เค•เคฟเคธเฅ€ เค•เฅ‹ เคฌเคคเคพเคจเคพ เคจเคนเฅ€เค‚ ๐Ÿ˜›
        เค†เคชเค•เฅ‡ เคฒเฅ‡เค–เคจ เค•เคฒเคพ เคธเฅ‡ เคœเคฒเคจ เคนเฅ‹เคคเฅ€ เคนเฅˆ เคฎเฅเคเฅ‡ เค•เคญเฅ€ เค•เคญเฅ€ ๐Ÿ˜…

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      3. Navneet Kumar says:

        เค†เคช เคธเคฐเฅเคตเคถเฅเคฐเฅ‡เคทเฅเค  เคนเฅ‹ เค”เคฐ
        เคธเคฐเฅเคตเคถเฅเคฐเฅ‡เคทเฅเค  เค•เฅ‹ เคฆเฅ‚เคธเคฐเฅ‹เค‚ เคธเฅ‡ เคœเคฒเคจเฅ‡ เค•เฅ€ เค•เฅเคฏเคพ เคœเคฐเฅ‚เคฐเคค ๐Ÿ˜

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, dear! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž So glad you liked it! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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  7. Brad Osborne says:

    You have such a beautiful way of capturing those fleeting moments that hang in our lives like long years. The intensity and strength of the emotions you convey are powerful and rounded. We have all been to this placed where we are left to wonder what is our own reality. Well written, little one! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ˜˜โฃ

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thanks a lot, Brad! So glad you think that way! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Sending you loads and loads of love! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’žโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Now you’re giving me super happy vibes. Thank you so much! ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Ishita. This means a lot coming from you. I really really adore your works. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’žโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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