Oh, dear boy, you had such a beautiful smile,
One that shone bright through your eyes.
Oh, dear boy, you were such a kind soul,
Wild, free and out of control.
You were so carefree, I envied you
Always surrounded by jolly hues.
But then, tragedy stuck you like lightening,
Stole that smile, so bright and heart-warming.
Rivers and rivers of tears were spilt,
But, nothing healed your heart that split.
Now you smile, a smile so formal,
Your dark eyes, make my heart shudder.
It’s all gone and forgotten you say,
But it’s that tragedy running you every day.
What happened was cruel, I wish them upon none,
But what you’ve become makes my heart burn.
A shell of a man, that once was so jolly,
A living dead, faking smiles so dolly.
Cry your eyes out, break down once again,
Fix yourself back to what used to be my friend.
I shall stay by you side, take all the time you need,
That jolly friend is the one who I dearly miss.

Felt so much connected with this one… truly, I am speechless…
Thank you so much dear. 🙈🙈🙈💖💖💖😘
This one absolutely stunned me
It was amazing
Awww… 🥰🥰🥰 Your comment always warm my heart!! 🙈🙈💖💖💕💕
And talking to you brightens up my day
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I could comment back on this one thousands of lines, I guess in my next post now.
I’ll be looking forward to your new post Rishabh!! 🙈🤗🤗💖💖💖💕💕💕
Can feel this very well. Loved reading this!!
Thanks a million Harsh. So glad you loved it! 🙈❤️❤️❤️❤️
Absolutely beautiful!!
Thanks a million Aditi! So glad you liked it. 🙈🙈🤗🤗💕💕💖😘 Have a beautiful day! 😇
Very emotional one. Felt that level of ache. Beautifully written one Shreya.🤩👍
Thanks a million Tushara. So glad you liked it. 🙈🙈🤗🤗💕 Have a wonderful day! 💖💖💕❤️❤️
Awww
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This is just beautiful, emotions, love everything. ❤️
Thank you so much dear! 🙈🙈💖💖💖 Just read your poem Unconditional Love, it’s superb. ❤️❤️❤️
You’re welcome. And I’m glad you liked it….😊❤️
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You have a beautiful heart to fell the sufferings and pains of your friend
Thank you so much Haroon!
You’re welcome
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This is beautiful.
Thanks a million Tom. So glad you liked it! 🥰🥰🤗😘😘😘💕💕💖💖💖❤️❤️
I have nominated you for the Libester Award. Please have a look
https://daneelyunus.com/2020/05/06/liebester-award-2/
Thank you so much dear. I’ll definitely accept it. However, I may take a little time as I’ve lot of pending awards. Much love. 🤗🤗💕💖❤️❤️
Most welcome, I will wait for your answers
It’s such an honor dear. Thank you so much for the nomination! 💕💖
Welcome dear
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Another exceptional composition, Shreya!
Thank you so much Brad! 🙈🙈🥰🥰🤗💕💕💖
Ripe emotions curated so beautifully.
Loved it! ❤️❤️
And yep, it’s relatable. 😩
Thank you so much dear. I’m so very happy you loved it. 🥰😍😍😍And pretty sad that you could relate to it. 💔💔😭🤗🤗😘😘
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This is gorgeous, lovely wild heart! I love the expression of her loss here. Powerful. This can happen for either sex, I believe.
So true! One tragic incident can completely change a person. 💔
🤗🤗 But all is not lost. There is ❤❤
True!! 💖💖💖
<3
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This is so heart stirring shreya…🤩💙it’s uniquely wonderful… the way u have carved this poem is as amazing as you 💕🤗🤗
How do I come up with new words to thank you, Anushka? 🤗🤗🥰🥰
You don’t have to.
Keep sharing your wonderful posts Shreya 💙
You’re the sweetest Anushka! 🥰🥰🥰
It’s amazing 😍❤️😍
Thank you so much dear. 💕
What a good friend. . .
Haha… You woke up? 😬
haha. Are you stalking me??
Ohh yes… 😈😈😈
haha ok you made a devil face but you are the nicest, most innocent person here haha
Shhh… That’s supposed to be a secret! 😉😉
hahaha oh ya I forgot B-)
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Really loved this one 🍁🍁😊
Thank you so much dear. I hope to keep writing poems that you’ll love. 🤗🤗💕💖❤️❤️❤️
Soulful❤
Thank you so much dear! ❤️❤️❤️💖💕
Oh my….the way your words are melting my heart…I can’t express but I can never disregard❤️
Your comments are making me dance with happiness Navin. I’m so glad you’re liking my words. 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗💕💖💖💖❤️💖
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Very moving! You have a wonderful gift.
Many thanks for stopping by my travel and photography blog.
Thank you so much dear!
Beautifully written 💖💕
Do read my blogs too !
Your reviews are valuable.
Thank you so much! I’ll definitely visit your blog… ❤️❤️❤️💞💞💞❣️❣️❣️
Beautifully expressed!
A tragedy can change a person in a blink of an eye.
Thank you so much, Mariam. So glad you liked it. ❤️❤️🤗🤗😘😘
Beautiful !
Thank you so much, Dakshali! <3
You’re welcome !
I keep coming back to this one, and I wonder why does it feel the way that it does?
Maybe you’re the lost friend. 🤗🤗😬😬😘😘💕💕♥️♥️
As the author, you would know to whom it is addressed. And since I am no one, I know it cannot be me
Everyone is lost someway or the other… Maybe you’re the lost friend to someone or maybe you have a lost friend too. 😬😬🤗🤗🤗😘