When I was a little girl, I used to draw a home,
Remotely in this shape, made up of bricks and wooden door.
For a long time, that was how I drew a home. After all, that’s what I was taught.
My home didn’t look like that, it didn’t matter to me though.
I was terrible at art and that was the easiest home to draw.
Strong building to shelter us, that’s what I thought home was.
But oh dear, I was so wrong. Home is where the heart is.
Not made up of just bricks and stones, forged by love instead.
Home is where family is. Home is where we feel the safest.
Home doesn’t always need to be a building; it could just be a warm embrace!
For NaPoWriMo Day 9. Poem in the shape of an object.
yes, it was truly 😍 lovely 🤩🤩each Line❣️heart felt💕
Thank you so much Rishabh ❣️💕💕💕🙈🙈💞💞💞
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So true. Loved the last line the most 🙂
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you enjoyed it. ❣️💕💕
Beautiful
Thank you Haroon! ❣️
A warm embrace it is🥂
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It is true indeed. Home is where heart is🤗
I’m so happy you could relate to this. ❤️❤️ Thank you so much Rashmi! ❣️
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Well written, Shreya! Why can all use the reminder of what home truly is! Sending much love! ❤❣❤
Thank you so much Brad! Sending you loads of love… ❤️❤️❤️
Now this was cute.
Thank you Bharath ❣️ 🙈
U are truly a gifted blogger:) The lines speak it..💚
Thank you so much Ananya!! This means so much to me. 🙈🙈 Much love! ❣️❤️❤️❤️
Stay blessed.. 🙂 🙂
You too ❣️
The home that full of love is the real home….It is not a home that made of bricks and stones…Thanks for sharing this words about home…much love,,,,
I’m so glad you could relate to this. 🙈🙈❣️❣️❤️ Take care & stay safe. Much love. ❤️💕💕💕💕💞
Loveee 💕
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Ah! Moving poetry!
Thank you so much 💕
As always the ending is too good. 👍
Thank you so much! Your appreciation motivates me to come up with better endings. ❤️💞🙈❣️❣️
You are welcome.
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Beautiful words 💖
Thank you so much! 💕💞
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Such a brilliant poem!❤️
Thank you so much Ritisha! I’m glad you enjoyed this. Stay safe & take care. ❣️💞💞💞💕
You’re welcome. I hope you are well.❤️
I’m good. How have you been doing?
I’m alright!
Nice to hear that. Stay safe and take care! 💞❣️
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You drew a house, but needed (or had) a home.
Yep! Things back then were so simple. 😬❣️
so true…. miss those days
Me too! But during those days I couldn’t wait to grow up. 😅😅💞💞
Same. Now I’m watching old cartoons trying to be a child again 😀
Haha. Me too. What’s your favorite cartoon? 😅
of all time was Rugrats. When I go back and watch it now, it’s kind of scary, lol!
I have never watched it. I think I should. 😬
Wow so what’s your favorite?
Tom & Jerry! 😬😍
Wow, taking it back to the classics!
There’s nothing like the classics! ❣️
True – if going with classics, I guess I’m going with Disney!
What’s your favorite Disney movie ?
Alladin. The Original. I always associated with him 😉 What’s yours?
Moana
oh ya, that’s one of my favorites, too 🙂
Nicee❣️
Ah, beautiful! 😘
Thank you so much dear. ❣️💞
Home is where the heart is😊
Indeed! ❣️💞 Stay at home, stay safe 💕
Excellent ….. Our hearts just look like a home which not made of bricks or wood .💕💕💕
True! I hope you feel at home and safe whole you stay in. Take care! ❣️💞💞
Very beautiful 😊
Thank you so much Ava ❣️
True …
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The core is the real home…so true ❤️
Thank you so much Navin. 💕❤️
Your welcome ❤️
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Please check the link out:
https://navinspoems.com/2020/04/10/liebster-award/
Thank you so much Navin! This is such an honour 🙈😘❣️❣️
Your most welcome. You deserve it…you must know 😘❤️💙
Your appreciation means so much to me Navin! 💕
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Beautiful poem 💋
Thank you so much dear. ❤️
My pleasure darling 😍💋
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Love your blog
This means so much to me. I hope to keep creating content you enjoy. ❤️🤗😘😘
Your welkome darling I do Enjoy it❤️
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Great work. Once I started a creative writing exercise borrowing an idea from a presentation I had seen previously by educators who specialized in cognitive psychology. Very simply, two people work quickly and collaboratively on one screen. If you are by yourself, this can work too, but use a stop watch of some kind. A short, finite time is essential for best results or you will start to self-criticize and freeze up. Students sat at desks with one piece of paper and one pen or pencil, but it could be achieved sharing a screen on line once that is set up with a timer. All ideas over two or three minutes at the most get recorded on the one same screen with no spell check or second guessing. This stage of creation is a cumulative stage. After the agreed upon time reaches stop, you can do various things to look over and refine your list, such as pick the best idea or group them into sub categories and so on. Then you can expand on them or write about them etc. One cue I gave my class was, “In 2 minutes, list as many unusual homes you can think of. Be daring and creative (I might throw out a few examples of unconventional ideas in this category such as: park bench, womb, cave, garage) and then I said “Ok…go”
One other thing I can share. On my blog I wrote about igloos recently in a poem called “Igloo Love” which you might like to take a look at some time. Best regards.
I’ll definitely check it out. Thank you so much 💕
I agree dear poet.
“Home is where family is. Home is where we feel the safest.
Home doesn’t always need to be a building; it could just be a warm embrace!”
A wonderful poem shared.
Thank you so much John. 💕❣️🤗🥰
Well penned 👏
Thank you so much Sonia. 💞
Oh your words are touching.🥰❣
Thank you so much! 🤗😘❣️
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