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Long Distance Sucks

Waking up has become a chore.
Damn! I even miss your snore.
The stale smell of your morning breath,
I’d kiss you even with it.
 
As the first alarm of the day rings,
Stretching, my arms search for you,
Only to realize an empty bed,
Followed by an icy chill in my chest.
 
And when I open my eyes,
I don’t see your face.
Hurriedly I hit you with a ‘Hey’
Only to miss you even more.

 
I miss your calming citrus smell,
And warmth of your embrace even more.
I miss our morning kisses,
And the blissful silence that followed.
 
Stupid rash decision we made.
This distance is killing me!
Each text we exchange rips me apart,
Makes me realize, you’re not next to me.

Featured image by: Jess Foami from Pixabay

Responses

  1. Untold Stories Avatar

    Damn, it’s so beautiful. I have been searching new words to appreciate your work.. it’s always so soothing and so beautiful 🙂🙂

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Rashmi! This means do much to me… 🙈🙈😘😘😘 đŸ˜ŦâŖī¸

  2. rishabh kumar Avatar

    🙈🙈What should I say 🙈🙈

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Nothing đŸ˜Ŧ🙈

  3. Bharath Upendra Avatar

    I know how it feels.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      It’s a terrible terrible feeling 😭

      1. Bharath Upendra Avatar

        I know. Hang in there.

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Barely hanging on…

      3. Bharath Upendra Avatar

        Good luck. 🙂

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Thank you 🤗âŖī¸

  4. Newbee Avatar

    Incredibly beautiful.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you 😊

      1. Newbee Avatar

        Pleasure buddy

  5. science_girrrrrl Avatar

    Beautiful…

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much! 🙈💕

      1. science_girrrrrl Avatar

        😉 Anytime

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        🙈âŖī¸

  6. creativeenvision Avatar

    Beautiful love it !

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much 💕💕

      1. creativeenvision Avatar

        You are Welcome

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you Haroon! âŖī¸

  7. bejamin4 Avatar

    Good post! And you’re right: it sucks! (Until you can close the distance).

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      True! Until you can close the distance…

  8. Brad Osborne Avatar

    This is so beautifully expressive and the emotions you create so strong and truly felt. It reads with a smooth flow, each stanza digging a little deeper into the absence you feel. Your writing is progressing and the sharing of your heart is priceless. Keep writing, for we all fear being distant from your words! ❤😘🤗❤🍌

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Brad! I’m so glad you like it. Your appreciation is such a huge motivation for me! Much love. 💞💞âŖī¸âŖī¸â¤ī¸â¤ī¸đŸ’•

      1. Brad Osborne Avatar

        My pleasure, always! ❤❤âŖ😘💋

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        âŖī¸

  9. Jay Bleu Avatar

    It’s like wanting something you can never have. . . or having something you can’t enjoy . . .

  10. aarzu Avatar

    Lovely one… âŖī¸â¤ī¸âŖī¸

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much aarzu!

      1. aarzu Avatar

        You’re most welcome 🙂

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    […] Note: This poem for NaPoRiMo Day Six. And while you may wonder where was the moon in the picture, she was there. She was out-shined by the sun, or maybe, the darkness ate her up, but she was there, just feel her presence.Also, I didn’t follow the prompt on Day 5. It was too complicated and I’m still working on it. Nevertheless, I wrote something yesterday (not based on the prompt), check it out! […]

  12. Tone Avatar

    Totally relatable, beautifully written! 🙂

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much 💕

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much âŖī¸

  13. Abhin Thulasidas Avatar

    It really sucks😁

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Yep! Really sucks! 💔

  14. msfaroucheanshika Avatar

    It’s beautiful! It can be made into a soulful song too. Loved it!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much 💕💕âŖī¸â¤ī¸

  15. charlypriest Avatar

    Beautiful poem, although long distance works for me….. I´m just weird, I prefer to have a “wiki wiki” in 20 minutes and out we go each to his and her own place.

    Greatly written and great message.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Everyone has a different preference I guess.🙈 Thank you so much dear!! âŖī¸âŖī¸đŸ’•

  16. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    Long distance isn’t for everyone! Beautifully penned. 🙂

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Indeed! Kind distance isn’t for everyone. I’m so glad you like this. âŖī¸

      1. WildHeart Avatar

        Long**… Stupid typo🙈🙈🙈

  17. Art_Nomison Avatar

    I really sucks!đŸ¤Ŧ

  18. Ravisingh Avatar

    No comments.Its too good to say anything!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much. 😄😃

  19. Ravisingh Avatar

    Most welcome!

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  21. Vivek Avatar

    I read this poem with flashbacks…. Someone dear to me lives far far away… Thankyou for this beautiful piece. ❤ī¸

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      I’m so glad you could relate to this piece. Hope you’re doing well and staying safe. Much love. ❤ī¸

  22. SpiritedSoul Avatar

    Where r u and where r they?

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Somewhere far. 💔

      1. SpiritedSoul Avatar

        I hope this isnt the “ghoster”

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Most of my works are fictional… Don’t feel sad for me … It’s all part of my imagination. 🙈😘😘🤗💕💕âŖī¸

  23. sachins21 Avatar

    Yet we text knowing, they are the one.😊

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      True! ❤ī¸đŸ’•đŸ¤—

  24. Shreya Avatar

    Such an expressive piece of work ! I love your posts, I have dropped you a follow ❤
    Shreya| https://shreyarantswithpurpose.wordpress.com/

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Now I know, why didn’t WordPress let me use ‘Shreya’ as my username… 😂😂😂 I’m Shreya too, and I too rant with purpose. So, I’ll definitely follow you! ❤ī¸â¤ī¸â¤ī¸â¤ī¸

      1. Shreya Avatar

        Aww thanks ! I did not know WordPress allows only unique usernames. Shreya is such a common name, how come it allowed only me ?
        I’d already given you a follow, a few days back ❤

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        I don’t know… You are the lucky one, or maybe WildHeart suited me more… Cheers to sharing names, and reading blogs ! đŸĨ‚đŸĨ‚đŸĨ‚đŸĨ‚đŸ˜đŸ˜đŸ˜đŸ˜

      3. Shreya Avatar

        WildHeart does suit you loads !
        Cheers ! ❤ 😀

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Haha… Thank you! 💞💞

  25. ā¸›ā¸ąāš‰ā¸Ąāš„ā¸Ĩā¸„āšŒ Avatar

    Like!! Great article post.Really thank you! Really Cool.

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