Out in the world, ruthless as hell,
Beaten and battered on and on,
I thank my parents the most,
For teaching me how to thrive.
In a bloody soup of all problems,
I’ve learned to stay afloat,
Under all sorts of crisis,
I’ve cried, yet never gave up.
Besides this world filled with hate,
Love, in the purest form, exists,
And I shall make my momma proud,
For she made me who I am.
It matters not what shall come,
How crazy life can get,
I’m my daddy’s little warrior,
I’m the ruler of my destiny.
Thus poem is oozing out confidence ❤️awesome work
Thank you so much! Read Invictus by W E Henley. It’s my favorite poem. It gives me chills every single time I read it.
“I’m the master of my fate, I’m the captain of my soul” .. wow so so so good! Thanks a lot Shreya, that is an awesome poem! Saving it!
Hehe… It’s my fave.. 😍
Also the “unconquerable soul” .. just wow !
Yeahh… That poem is magic. 🔥
It is!
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Amazing!!
Thank you so much, Akshita. Read Invictus by W E Henley. I’m sure you’ll love it. ❤️
Oh nice, I ‘ll definitely read it!!
I just read it and I know why its your favourite.
The last two lines just change the whole aura of the poem. Its so so good!! Thanks for sharing!
Yeahh… For me, nothing is better than that one. It’s my ultimate favorite. 😂🙈❤️
Oh nicee!!
You should try Erin Hanson then. Pick any poem of his and you’ll love it!!
I will. ❤️
Wow Shreya, last stanza and specially concluding lines are absolutely lit✨
Hehe… Thank you so much!! Checkout Invictus by W E Henley. It’ll surely blow your mind. It’s my fave. ❤️
Sure I’ll do that.
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“Out of the night that covers me
Black as the pit from pole to pole,
I thank whatever gods may be
For my unconquerable soul.
In the fell clutch of circumstance,
I have not winced nor cried aloud.
Under the bludgeonings of chance
My head is bloody, but unbowed.
Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the Horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of the years
Finds, and shall find, me unafraid.
It matters not how strait the gate,
How charged with punishments the scroll,
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.”
As the Poem Invictus Instructs
Inspiring Mandela in His 30 Year
Prison Forgiving Those in Mastery
of Self And Shadows of the Past
Who Held
Him in a
Small Cell
For that Long
For It’s True Now
Is All that Exists
if We Conquer Now
iN LiGHT All DarK is Past
No Reason Yet Now Not to Forgive
Moving Away From Hate and Live
In Pure Love Now To Give and
Share Free Seeing LiGHT Come
From DarK in Forgiveness Even More
For WHere there is No Forgiveness THere
Is No Love Only Past And Resentment Hate Living THere
Shall i Believe in Any God Or Man as Love Failing the
Test to Forgive
For Any
Period Now
or Forever more
to Punish Others NO
If Nelson Mandela Will
Do It Surely God And Even
Jesus as Story is Capable of
RiSinG Higher In Love Than
Any Punishment of Hell Forever
For It is True Those Who Go to Hell
On Earth as i Surely Visited for 66 Months
With the Worst Pain Known to Humankind assessed
As Worse Than Real Crucifixion From Wake to Sleep
That Type Two Trigeminal Neuralgia No Drug Would Touch
i Shall Wear the Crown of the Devil And Spit on Hate And Fear
With LoVE RiSinG ForevernoW iN Forgiveness Ever More Now For Real
TRuE DEViLS
Ones Who Have
Seen Real Horns
Will Never Send Anyone
Back to Hell Where they come From For Real
Nepal Origin of Hinduism and Birth Place of
Buddha A Rich Heritage You Share for Sure
With Tallest Everest Mountain in Himalaya Mountains to Shreya
So Yes Stand Tall With Spirit of ‘Invictus’ More Dear FRiEnD NoW..:)
No matter how many times I read it, this piece always gives me chills. It’s been stuck with me since my school days. It’s my literally favourite poem. Nothing beats this one for me.
Thanks For
Turning
me On
To it Shreya!😊
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Life may be the wind in the sails that pushes us along, but we are our own Captains with a strong hand on the tiller. Beautifully written, Shreya!
Thank you so much, Brad. Really means a lot to me. ❤️❤️❤️
Beautifully written Shreya, each line reflects how much you are proud of your parents. While I was reading it, the first thought came to my mind was ,I wish my daughter feels the same one day. Tht day I will live carefree
Thank you so much, Gauri. So glad it could touch your heart. ❤️❤️
That day onwards I will live carefree as I will feel content of the fact that I have prepared my daughter for this dreadful world. Though parents worries never goes away .That contended feeling of your daughter being prepared for this world ,is many times greater then her achievements. This is definitely one of my personal goals thx for reminding me that.🤗.
Haha… You’re right, parents never stop worrying. 😬❤️ Sending super duper best wishes to you and your daughter. 💖💖