One pill, two pill, three pill, four pill,
For broken hearts, there are no pills
Yet I keep popping them in,
Hoping that they somehow heal,
Painkiller for broken hearts,
There should be something like that,
But as it hasn’t been invented,
I take the stuff that has been marketed,
Ibruprofen, morphine, codeine,
Do some magic, please heal me.
Five pill, six pill, seven pill, eight pill,
I know I should really stop it!
Yet I continue swallowing them,
My need, I can’t tame,
It’s risky, and I know it,
I’m trying to stay in limit.
Nine pill, ten pill, forget counting,
Oh yes, I keep swallowing.
If these pills can’t heal me,
Can they at least kill me?
THIS IS A WORK OF FICTION. Don’t worry!
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OMG!!!! Killer write up! So strong!!! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼I mean it’s amazing!
Thank you soooooo much! So glad you like it. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Words of Allah is healing to the broken heart…😊😊😊
Truee… ♥️♥️♥️♥️
❤️❤️❤️
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♥️♥️♥️🥰🥰🥰
You nailed it in the first two lines , shreya. Whoaaa!!
Hehe… Thank you so much, Yash! Glad you liked it. ♥️♥️♥️♥️
Wow !!
Pills pills ……
Wonderful poems with
That Combination…
Really a appreciated poem.
Thank you so much, Anjali! 🤗🤗🤗♥️♥️♥️🥰🥰🥰🥰
Your Welcome💗
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Well done! (and thanks for letting us know that this is only fiction!)
Haha… Thank you so much, Ben! 🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰🥰
❤️….well written….I know it’s a fantasy poem….but kinda scary if someone does it this way….coz pills can’t heal at all….there’s only one pill for that….the heart
Thank you so much, Navin! So glad you liked it. You’re right, pills don’t heal. ♥️
❤️you’re welcome, Shreya
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Very well written Shreya. There is no pill for a broken heart.
Thank you so much, dear! ♥️♥️♥️
Well done! 👏🏻
Thank you so much! ♥️♥️
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Brilliant 🖤
Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️♥️
You’re most welcome 🖤
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Wow, Shreya. Beautifully written. I loved this one.
Thank you, Shweta. So glad you loved it. ♥️♥️♥️♥️
Beautiful and poignant! 😇
Thank you so much! ♥️
I love this!
Thank you so much! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Immersive! 💕
Thank you so much! 🥰🥰🥰
Just
Glad You
Are Okay!🤗
Thank you so much! ♥️
Pleasure all
Mine.. Thank
You Shreya🤗😊
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As usual, you capture the torrent of emotions in such lovely words. I find this so relatable, as we have all had times when we just wanted the pain to stop. Well written, Shreya!
Thank you so much, Brad! So glad you like it. 🥰🥰🥰♥️♥️♥️💖💖💖
Thank god it’s fiction!!!!
A wonderful poem!❤
Thank you so much, Ishita! ❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰🥰
It’s relieving to know that you are okay!
Nice poem by the way 👍
Thank you, Rashmi! 🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️
Thank God its a fiction 🙂
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Love this.
Thank you so much! ❤️❤️❤️
Wonderful and unique
Thank you so much! 🥰
You are welcome my friend
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I can relate! I take plenty of pills and I have no choice! I wish I didnt have to but its necessary! Ug sigh!
I really hope you get better, Carol! 🤗🤗💖💖 Take care. Loads of love and power to you. ❤️❤️❤️
Addiction is seriously such a heart breaking disease 🙁 this made me emotional .
Xo
🥰🥰🥰🥰 it truly is… ❤️❤️❤️ Thank you so much! 💞