If I close my eyes tomorrow,
Will you wallow in sorrow?
Or will you just forget me,
My absence unnoticed?
Sometimes I wish you cared,
Sometimes I wish you were near,
But you were never mine,
I have no right to pine.
And as I wonder,
Will you even shed a tear,
If I close my eyes?
I realizeβ¦
I’m already deleted,
Your life perfected.
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Relatable, poignant. Nicely written.
Thank you so much! π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°
This really pulls at the heart, Shreya! We all know what it feels like to not be chosen and you have articulated it beautifully! Well done!
Thank you so much, Brad!! For encouraging me from the very beginning of my blogging journey… Your words have always pushed me to keep writing. β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
It happens! It amazed me at how easily I got deleted from someoneβs mind while I struggled! Beautifully penned
Thank you so much, dear! It sucks to be deleted. How are you?
Oh yes it sucks! Iβm good Shreya.. how are you?
I’m good too. β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈπππ
When We Are Deleted
In A Way it is more
Room for Us
To Generate
A Hug As
There Are So
Many Who Will
Appreciate Unconditional
Love Who Only Breathes
Genuinely
This Way
With
SMiLes
To Giveπ€πΆ
So true!! Wise words. Thank you so much. β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ π€π€π€π€π€π€π€
Pleasure all
Mine Shreyaππ€π
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We get replaced easily.
Even though it’s a question that you put in the end, will I be deleted? Somewhere you know the answer and it’s a yes.
Again a wonderful poem by you Shreya!π€
Thank you so much, Rashmi… β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ Being deleted sucks. ππππ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί But yeah, it opens up place for people who actually matter. πππ
Beautiful! I hope youre ok? xoxo
I’m good dear. π€π€ππ How have you been?
Your poems have so deep emotions, sometimes they make me cry. You’re really an amazing writer.β€β€
Awwww….. π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯° Thank you so much!! It truly means a lot to me. ππππ
Oh wow, this is a very special poem, i will remember this for the rest of my life, thank you.
Damn!!! ππππ₯°π₯°π₯°π₯° Thank you so much!! β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ This really means a lot to me. ππππ Loads of love!! πππ
Love you forever my friend β€β€β€β€β€β€
Love you too! β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈππππ
Nah definitely love you more lol β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
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β€β€β€β€β€β€ love you forever my friend
Hehe… π€π€π€π€π€π€π€β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
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β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
You are beautiful and i love you β€β€β€β€
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Your the most beautiful woman in the world β€β€β€ love ya forever
Thank you so much! π₯°π₯°
Love you β€
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<3
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You will stay alive in your poems always.
There’s no way that you can delete a part of you in them and make us stop meeting you there.
Hehe… Thank you so much, Chetna!! You’re the sweetest. π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°πππππ
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Sending love to you girl.π€
Btw, I have one thing to ask you..
When I clicked on your reply to go to your comments section..
It said.. unable to retrieve this post.
Do you know how to fix this??
I really have no idea…
So sad…. Hard to ever really know how much you mean to someone. . .
True… ππππ
The sad truth. Its like holding on to something which was never yours.
You have written this amazingly.
Thank you so much!!! π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯° So glad you like it. β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
This is so relatable, seriously!
I’m kinda sad you could relate. ππ€π€
Oh no, you don’t have to. Gone is the past, I’m happy I’m with better meaningful souls around π
That’s nicee… π€π€π€ππππ
You have written it so beautifully. Everyone has a replacement these days!
Thank you so much, dear. π€π€π€π€ππππβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ