The Waves

Poetry

I was skinny dipping by the beach,
Building sandcastles, collecting shells,
Making crowns out of seaweed,
Watching the paper boats sail.

The deep blue called me in,
The serenity, tempting me,
Step by step, I walked in,
Until the waves swallowed me.

I woke up in the middle of an ocean,
Gasping for breath, rapidly sinking,
Cursing my stupid decision,
Wracking my mind for a solution.

I had to find my way back,
Safe and sound to the land,
Even if it means learning to swim,
In the middle of an ocean.

Featured image by: Emiliano Arano from Pexels

81 thoughts on “The Waves

      1. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯° Thank you so much!! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

  1. This flows beautifully like the ocean waves you describe. The imagery is lovely and the story tragically beautiful and haunting. I think grammatically, Ben may have a point about the use of the word “wreaking”, but I saw it more poetically as a purposeful word play to insinuate the idea that thinking of a solution was “wreaking” havoc in your mind. Either word does not make any difference it how well this is written. Well done!

    1. Thank you so much, Brad!! I’m so glad you like it. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ’—πŸ’—β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°About wreaking and wracking, I actually didn’t ponder upon it for long. I just wrote what came to my mind. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ€ͺ

    1. Haha… I knew it!! πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ Thank you so much, Dave!! πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️ How are you?? πŸ’–

      1. I’m thankfully doing much better! Thank you for asking! ❀❀😘😘😘😘 Just not yet ready to go skinny dipping yet, haha.. but I miss swimming. I will get back in the water next week, I hope. Do you like to swim, Shreya?

      2. That’s okay. Skinny dipping doesn’t need much skill. It’s very freeing, but we’d have to be very careful trying it in public. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

    1. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯° I don’t know what to say…. You always overload me with praises. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’– How have you been? How’s everything going? β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

      1. I’m okaish… Kinda planning to catch up on your blog… Have been so busy with stuff. Miss you. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

      2. I miss you there as well.
        But I know you are really occupied with your work and stuff.
        So I just get happy wherever I see you there.
        Also I know you care and are there always πŸ€—

    1. Thank you so much, Cindy. So glad you like it. I used the embed option on WP to link it to Insta. You have to click on blocks, then click on more options, then you’ll find it. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

      1. Ohhh… Take care. How’s everything going on? I’ve been out of blog for a while. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ Gotta give yours a read. ❀️❀️❀️

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