Tears in my eyes,
Those exquisite drops,
Each with its own story,
Like shiny white pearls,
From the deep blue sea.
As a menace attacks my soul,
Or breaks my heart in two,
Grief and sorrows all piled up,
Creates one glimmering drop,
Just ready to fall.
Laced with emotions so intense,
A harrowing burden in my chest,
And pain that’s almost physical,
Encapsulated in a little ball,
My tiny exquisite drop.
While I treasure them all,
Every single little drop,
I pray that they fall,
And unburden my heart,
From the weight it holds.
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This is so beautifully crafted, capturing the deep emotion and mystery about the story behind it…Iβm an instant fan! π
Your words make me blush! πππ I feel so adored. π₯°π₯°π₯° Thank you so much! πππ
You are most welcome my friend, may you continue blushing in a good way ππ
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Deep and lovely poetry! π
Thank you so much, Prerna! πππ
Always welcome! π
Beautifully written and evocative, Shreya! Well done!
Thank you so much, Brad! π€π€π€ππππ
My pleasure, little one! ππ₯°πΉ
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That is what tears are supposed to do… Well worded! The trouble is that one tear only carries it’s own weight; all too often an ocean of tears us needed.
Is needed, not us. π
And sometimes we drown in the ocean we cry, sometimes we learn how to swim.
so so beautifully written π
Thank you so much, Era! πππ
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this poem dripped me on the floor. π Re-posted: https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/09/12/tears-in-my-eyes-shreya-joshi-wild-scared-crazy/
Thanks for sharing!
Thank you soooooo much!!! It truly means a lot. π€π€π€ππππ
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Beautifully written Shreya .. itβs lovely … π
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So beautiful Shreya and they fall into a beautiful river to take your pain away while you float in peace and joy!!! Hope you don’t mind me finishing the storyβ€οΈβ£οΈ So heartfelt.
It’s a beautiful finish, Cindy. Loved it. Thank you so much! π€π€π€β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈπππ
Oh you are so welcome. Glad it was well received-:)β€οΈ
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Let them fall…
And form an ocean??
Sure, if that’s possible.
In a world of imagination, everything is possible! ππ
Then, ocean it is! ππ
Then we can go surfing! πππ
Sure! But I’ll need to learn surfing first π
Haha… Me too! πππ
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This is beautiful! I absolutely loved it! <3 stunning! <3 xoxo
Thank you so much, Carol! π€π€π€πππβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
Tears lighten the soul
To pursue a new goal
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