Don’t you see it,
How you slice me?
Your words sting,
And your actions kill.
On my heart,
You’re playing dart.
Or is it archery,
That you practice?
Now each scar hurt,
A little less every day.
While it’s exploding inside,
With all the dreams we’d seen.
Our happily ever after,
Our promises of forever,
Oh, how beautiful they were!
Now, I silently take all your brunt,
As you prove it’s all my fault.
Scars in my heart now laugh,
As you keep giving me new ones.
Yet I keep holding on,
To the promises we made.
I keep the forever part,
Sadly ever after, you gift.
Nice!
Thank you, Harsh! 💕
Heartbreaking yet beautiful…
Thank you so much, Kamya! ♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘
You’re welcome!!
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So heartbreaking, but so sublime❤❤ The last two lines were the cherry on the cake😘😘 Fabulous Shreya!
Thank you so much, Ishita. Your comment has got me grinning wide like a monkey. 😂😂🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘♥️♥️♥️ So glad you liked it. 😘😘
Aw, I’m glad I made you so happy!
Have a wonderful day❤😘
You too have a wonderful day. Sending you loads and loads of love. 🤗🤗🤗😘😘♥️♥️♥️❤️❤️❤️❤️💓💓💕💕
Beautiful, profound and amazing as usual. Great job Shreya🥰❤️
Thank you so much, Tarushi. So glad you’re enjoyed it. ❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘
😊😊😊 Keep writing like this!
I hope so… 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘😘❤️❤️♥️♥️
Don’t worry, you will😇
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Beautiful rhythm. And these lines “Now each scar hurt,
A little less every day.” Loved these lines very much, especially it’s symbolic significance.🤩❤️👍
Thank you so much, Tushara!!! So glad you liked it. I hope this stays just a poem and not a reality for any of us. 🤗🤗😘❤️❤️❤️♥️♥️♥️
That’s true. Let it be 😊
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Beautifully written, Shreya. I especially liked, ‘You’re playing dart.
Or is it archery,
That you practice?’
Amazing choice of words! Well done 🙌
Thank you so much, Uzzawal!! 😍😍😍😍 So gald you liked it! 💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️♥️♥️
Well articulated.. shared it..
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/06/02/a-promise-of-forever-wildheart-wild-scared-crazy/
Thank you so much, dear. Everytime you share my poem, I’m jumping with joy. 🙈🙈🙈❤️❤️❤️
(picturing one little WildHeart jumpin’ on the bed.. ) don’t bump anything now. 😉 Cheers! I am glad it brings you joy. Have a good one.
Haha… Don’t worry!! 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘 Thank you so much. Sending you loads and loads of love. ♥️♥️♥️♥️
Happy writing. 🙂
Happy writing to you too! 💓💓💓
<3 <3 <3
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Tearful 😢
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Heart wrenching
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This was wistful Shreya. Each and every line…having there own significance. This poetry of yours…has touched me. Specially these lines…
Now each scar hurt,
A little less every day.
Beautiful ❤️❤️
Thank you so so so so so much, Anushka. Love you to the moon and back. ♥️♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘😘
Love you more Shreya 😍😍🙈❤️❤️❤️✨✨
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I love you so so so much more! 😍
You continue to amaze me! Well written! ❤❤❤ Much love! 😘
Thank you so much, Brad! ♥️♥️♥️🙈🙈🙈😘😘😘
This is beautiful 🤍
Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️♥️
Beautiful and touching
Thank you so much, Haroon! 💕💕
You’re welcome
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GREAT POST!
Thank you so much, Eshal! 💕💕
No problem Shreya!!!!
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Painful words quotes with true and pure feelings… 💔
Well penned ❣️
Thank you so much, aarzu! ♥️♥️♥️🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘
You’re most welcome
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Wow but why it was sad.
Write something where there is positivity. I wanna read it!
Well, that’s hard 😂😂 but I’ll try 💓💓😘🤗
Nothing’s hard for Shreya. She can write anything and everything!
Haha Rashmi! I tried really really hard, came up with something that includes happy. But it isn’t happy. I hope you like it. I’ll try and post something with loads of positivity soon. I promise. ❤️
I am gonna check that soon.
Thank you Shreya ♥️
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Beautiful lines, Shreya….❤️
Thank you so much, Navin! ♥️
What came up is I have lots of scars. But, they make me who I am today. I really appreciate this post. Thanks.
Awww…. Bryan! You made my day. So glad you liked it. ♥️♥️♥️
Beautifully written, Shreya!
Thank you so much, Shweta! ❤️❤️❤️
My pleasure 😊
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Ohh, I can feel that pain. That’s a well written, Shreya.
Thank you so much, Leif. So glad you liked it. ♥️♥️♥️
beautifully written and heart touching.
Thank you so much, Shrutika! ♥️♥️♥️