Our Kind Of Sundays


Unwashed face, smelly breath,
Lazy us, on the bed,
Messy hair, forgotten clothes,
You play your favorite 80s tunes.
I climb onto your back,
With a ball point pen in my hand.
Slowly, I start marking all over,
Some poems, and a lot of doodles.
As I keep busy with my work,
As you sing me a beautiful song,
Immersed in your enchanting voice,
I trail some kisses down your spine.
Join me you say, with a gentle smile,
Only for you, then I sing.
I draw worse than a kindergarten child,
My voice is worse than that of crows,
But believe me when I’m with you,
I’m the best tattooist and a singer too.
With you…
I fall in love with me!
With you…
I’m at bliss!

For Eugi’s Weekly Prompt ‘Cherish’ and Thursday Poetry Competition ‘Love’! Cause, what’s love, if you’re not cherished?

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149 thoughts on “Our Kind Of Sundays

    1. It’ll be a sin if you don’t post that… It’s waaaayyyyy more better than this. And believe me, when I read literature, I recognize it.

  1. Relationship goals❤
    Like I said in the comments on my post.. The way you mould your thoughts and give them a shape of words and poem is just❤❤

    1. 🙈🙈🙈 Where do I hide, all this praises is making me super shy!!! 🙈🙈🙈🙈 Thank you so much! ❤️❤️❤️ But yeah, I like your words too… I keep waiting! 😍😍😍

      1. Haha… I used to be a workaholic! Once upon a time, but I treasured by Sundays… Except when I had to work on Sundays too… 😂😂😂😂

      2. Actually I was going to ask
        “Why do you think so?” But I made a typing mistake here.
        But thank you for the compliment.🙂

  2. Beautifully penned the moments and emotions, indeed when we are with the right person we feel at our best even when we are not according
    to the set standards
    and that’s matters the most being best in your own eyes
    With the right person, you love yourself little more ❤

    1. Thank you so much dear…. So glad you could relate to this! 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘💞❤️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❤️❤️❤️

    1. Thank you so much, Xavier… So glad you like it! 🙈🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘 Your sweet words are making me giddy with happiness. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰Sending you loads and loads of love.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  3. Tuhan Kita Sedang Lumpuh?
    Cerpen Melki Deni
    Barangkali Tuhan sedang jalan-jalan ke rumah-rumah para wakil rakyat, mencatat jumlah perut yang terlampau buncit akibat menelan mentah-mentah uang pajak tanah rakyat yang tak mampu dikelola. Tidak menutup kemungkinan Tuhan sedang melawati umat yang menderita sakit, miskin papa, tersingkirkan, terbuang, pengemis, gelandangan, tawanan, dan kaum buruh kasar.

    1. Thank you so much, Rashmi. The fact that you read this yesterday and came back today again to comment on it warms my heart. Sending you loads and loads of love. ❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😘🤗🤗🤗

  4. Shreya shreya shreya !!! No words to say!! One magnificent piece of poetry !! And loved this imagery of Sunday morning. Reminded me of mine ❤️❤️ though there has been some serious changes after my son’s birth.. we 3 enjoy lazy lazy mornings on holidays. Oh ,!! How i miss those now 😕😕😕

    1. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Nimaaaa, I’m so glad you could relate to this!! 🙈🙈❣️❣️❤️❤️ Kids doesn’t change lives significantly. But they also bring lots and lots of joy! 😬😬😬🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘💖💖💖💕💕💕❣️❤️ Happy lazy mornings to the three of you! 💖💖💖

      1. Thank you dear… but dont know when we can be together again… me and kiddo in India.. husband in UAE.. it has been more than 3 months now 😶😶

      2. We can meet only when the restrictions in both countries are lifted. We were supposed to return on March last.. but then lockdown in India happened 🙁

    1. Thank you so much, winner! 🤗🤗😘😘❣️😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💞💞💞💞💖💖 Congratulations to you too! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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