Her

Poetry

You tell me that you love me,
But it’s when you look at her,
You eyes glistens beautifully. 

It’s my hands that you hold,
And I can feel your grip tighten,
Every time she passes us. 

I’m on your phone’s wallpaper,
But it’s her photo that stays hidden,
In a quiet corner of your purse. 

And when you place your lips on mine,
I can almost feel it,
It’s her you’re searching for. 

You like stargazing with me,
But when you see a shooting star,
It’s her that you wish for. 

You promise a forever with me,
As you hold her in your heart,
Like a prize you can never posses. 

So, darling, do me a favor,
Chase the girl of you’re pining for,
Leave me alone, let me go. 

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118 thoughts on “Her”

    1. Thank you so much dear! 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈💞💞💞❣️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 I feel so happy that you liked it. 😍😍😍😍😍😍

      1. how could one not..truly divine..if words where knives you sunk them deep. I love to the point of such a minuscule level of incomprehensibly unbreakable…the only marks i accept are love…(smirk)….right…much love my flowic…blessed to read you on this journey.

      3. An emotion so sharp shows deep wit, understanding, and love….you deserve ever bit of adoration (hugs)…I am the one feeling honored!

  12. I love the flow and form of the tercets in stanza. It reads so smoothly. And your words are powerful and precise. This is an exceptional poem, little one. One of your best!

    1. Thank you so much, Brad. When you say ‘One of your best’ it gets me jumping around the house in excitement. So glad you loved it. 🙈🙈🤗😍💞💞❤️❤️❤️

    1. Quadraple Thank You!! One for reading this, one for appreciating this, one for nominating me and one for always supporting me. Sending you loads of love! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    1. So sorry dear. Are you alive? I hope you are, cause blogging world wouldn’t be so much fun without your banters. 😬🤗🤗💞💞💞

    1. Thank you so much, Navin. 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗🤗💞💞💞❤️❤️❣️❣️❣️❣️ Loads of love to you too! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❣️

    1. Yep! True… Don’t worry though, this is a work of fiction. 🙈🤗😘😘💞❣️❤️ Take care. Much love. ❤️❤️❤️

    1. Ah, Madhuri, you’re making me jump with joy. Thank you so much dear!! Sending you lots and lots of love. 🤗🤗🤗❣️💞💞😘😘

      1. I just wonder if you pictured that man’s actual love a dead girl or alive…otherwise why is he holding on to her…I want to you extend this story and make part 2 of it…hahaah…what say shreya…???Lots of love right back at you dear:)

      4. 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗❤️❤️❣️❣️🥰🥰🥰🥰💞💞💞💞 You make me feel so happy! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

    1. Me too, Shweta. I hope nobody has to go through this. Sending you loads and loads of love. ❤️❤️❤️❤️💞💞💞😍😘😘

    1. As you click the publish button there, I’m doing my happy dance here. Thank you so so so much! 😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘

  32. This is wonderfully penned. I am reminded of the old country western song that goes something like…”the hardest thing i’ll ever have to do, is holding her, and loving you.” Thank you again for your excellence.

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