You say Good Night at 10 pm,
And like my posts at 2 am.
You say you’re taking a nap,
Multiple times during the day.
And I think you lie,
You’re a never-sleep guy.
All night long, you stay awake,
Maybe counting the stars,
Or talking to the moon.
About all the things
Life has taken from you,
How totally destroyed are you!
And during the day,
When you say you nap,
It’s just your smooth excuse,
To cut the conversation short.
Faking the ‘oh-so-okay guy’
Is such a horrendous toil.
Is my assumption true?
How broken are you?
Or am I just imagining,
A reflection of me?
Assuming every single person,
To be as dismantled as me.
Inspiration: Bharath Upendra
Featured image by: Suvajit Roy from Pixabay
Heartbreaking!💔💔 My heart sank after reading this! Sudden rush of sadness surrounded me.😢😢 Have never felt this way ever after reading a poetry since a long time.
Thank you so so much dear!!! I’m so glad I could evoke such strong emotions. Anyways, how are you now? 💕🤗❣️❣️❤️ Have you overcome the rush of sadnesses? 😘😘😘
Yup! I am fine.😃 Thanks for your concern.😊🤗
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Well, I should be the one asking you that question.
I’m perfectly perfect! 🤗💕
Good!😊
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The emotions were real with this one 😢😳
Thank you so much, Brandon! 🙈🙈🙈🥰🥰🥰💞❣️❤️
Yes, it were.
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getting dismantled!! 💔😞
Aap ko kya hua? 🤗😘
hme kuch hota hi nhi, vhi to dikkat hai… khair apki dua hai… baki pta nhi 🤗
Haha… 🤗🤗😘😘😘
I.love this. It speaks to me as this scenario is familiar. This hasbgot lots of levels to it.
Thank you so much dear!! So glad you loved it. As it speak it you, I just wanted to know, are you alright?? I really hope you’re doing well. Feel free to reach out. 💕❤️❣️😘
I am fine thankyou. But you never really know when they are truly asleep and when they are not asbthey fake it. Often, they claim to be broken but are not really. But they break you with their games. For me, that is what the poem said ❤️
Haha… Thank you so much dear! ❤️❣️❣️💕💕
We all can have different perception. 😬😬😬
That is so true. Your poem is great.
And you’re super nice! 🙈🤗🤗😘😘💕💕❣️
Thankyou. And so are you 😊
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This is so painful. I think anyone can connect with this content so easily. Very well written.
Hope you are doing good. 💖
Thanks a million Tanya. So glad you liked it. I’m good. How are you? 💕💕💕😘
You are welcome Shreya.
I did!!
I’m also good.💖
Take care! 🤗🤗😘💕
Wao, more power to your pen buddy. The poem also relates to me.
Thank you so much Sajid. Are you the never-sleep guy too?
Welcome! Yeah.
Are you alright?
We are all broken in this life so full!
Everyone have their own way to deal with the brokenness
True! 💔💔💔💔
I really fell asleep. 😭
Where did you find the picture? He looks as hopeless as I am. 😂
Haha… We can agree to disagree about what you do all day and all night long. You can keep your mask, I’ll keep the fact. 😝😂😂 And can you send me a hopeless picture of you? I’ll replace this. 😬😂
Oh you monster!! Nobody believes in truth these days. No, thank you. This picture is perfect. 😂
Why believe one truth, when you can create millions? 🤪🤪😂😂😂
This is atrocious. 😂😂
Whatever!
I never claimed to be an angel! 🤪😂
I don’t believe in angels. 😎
Still Angel is my favorite piece among all that you’ve written… 🤗😇
Haha! Thanks girl.
You never fail to make me laugh. ):
Blehhh 😝
Nice poem Shreya 😊, we all have something or something going in our heads, that it sometimes becomes difficult to find peace
True!! 💔💔 How are you?
I am good Shreya. ☺ how are you?
I’m good too.
that’s nice to hear. take care, and stay safe 💙
You too! 🤗🤗💕
Great poem… Really touched my heart… Sometimes i also feel like this…. But mostly I’m a sleepy person😜(thanks to this lockdown😆)
Thank you so much dear!!! I’m a sleepy person too… 😬😬😝🤗
Wonderful
Thank you so much Haroon! 💕💕
You’re welcome my friend stay blessed
You too dear! 🤗🤗❣️💕
Oh God Shreya 😃 (I am way like this, sometimes)
It is very apt to Bharath 😂 he is exactly this and that picture, it seems it has been made for him only..!! 🤣
Haha… Thank you so much Anushka!!! Even the hair matches Bharath ditto… 🤪😂😂 And yeah, the hapless sad emotion too… 😬😬🤗💕 I just hope he gets out of this sad sad vibes. 😝😝😝
Haha😂
Nobody can help him Shreya, he is a happy soul giving sombre vibes😅
Haha… Maybe… 😝😝😝😬 🤗💕💕
Idk why starting of the poem the first thought came to my mind was this, anyways beautiful piece
Thank you so much dear!! 🙈🤗💕 What came to your mind first? 😬
Arre ur inspiration,
🙈🙈🙈🥰🥰🥰💕💕💕 you make me feel so adored!! 🥰🥰🥰
The poem summed me up.
Masterpiece ❤
Thank you so much Yash. Are you alright? 💕🤗
Yes, I am. Thank you🙂. And I hope you are well too. Back on WP and I see your lots and lots of posts. Looks like I have so much to cover that I have missed😉.
But this poem is a jewel. I am going to save it.
Awww…. You made my day!! Thank you so much Yash. You’re the sweetest. 💕💕🥰😘😘 🙈🙈🥰🥰🥰💕💕❣️❤️
A beautiful poem, Shreya! I was intrigued by the perspective of wondering how much we see in another person may simply be a reflection of self as we seek to be seen and understood in the world that surrounds us. A lovely concept and a well written composition! ❤🌹❤😘
Thank you so much Brad. So glad you liked it. 🙈🙈🙈💕💕❤️❤️❣️❣️🥰🥰🥰
Love you, little one! ❤❣💕❣❤💋
Love you too Brad! ❤️❤️❣️❣️😘😘💕
Bharath, the inspiration box..
You were right he inspires everyone
Good one Shreya.✨
Thank you so much Rashmi!! 🙈🙈🥰🥰💕💕❤️❤️❣️😘😘😘😘😘 He’s truly an inspiring person. 😝💕💕💕
This is heartbreaking but seeing the inspiration made me smile. 😄 Great job, Shreya!
Thank you so much Shweta! 💕💕💕❣️🥰
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I have a feeling this was written for a real person.
The guy mentioned at the end of this post. It’s for him. Check his blog, he’s awesome!
Nice. Let me go there rn.
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Really like this, but don’t give him too hard a time, you need to be aware that men do like to doze off a lot, I think it dates back to their caveman days….you shouldn’t really stand outside the cave with a stopwatch…..
Haha… Nicee… Not staying a watch… 😬
This is great. I can just picture the guy.
Thank you so much dear! So glad you liked it. 🤗❣️❣️
This was beautiful 😢
Creative and engaging, had me leaning over, on the edge, feeling dragged from sentence to sentence.
I’m impressed.
Thanks for sharing 😄
I should be the one thanking you, for investing your time on reading this and for your sweet words of appreciate. Thank you so much, Brandon. This means a lot to me. 🙈🙈🤗🤗🥰💞❣️❤️
This hit hard & deep
So glad you could feel it! How have you been? 🤗🤗❣️
love you
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what is your name?
Shreya!
hi
Hi
how are you?
Good
what is your phone number?
I don’t share my phone number
why?
Cause it’s personal
what do you live?
please tell me
hello
Hi
hello
This was a poem which can be an apt description of so many people!!! Really well written!! And your inspiration… 😂😂😂😂 Honestly, when I read the second and third line, the first person that came to my mind was Bharath… 😂 You are right in point!!!
Haha… Thank you so much!! Bharath really vibes that way… 😂😂😂
This is perfect.
I don’t know why but whenever i read u the only thing comes to my mind is just “perfect”.
Perfection lies in the eyes of the reader. 😉😉😉