Is there the right way to mourn,
The death of someone you love?
We’ve all seen it in movies,
Tears flooding down the eyes.
Sad music, rain and all things grey,
But real life doesn’t sway that way.
Some people do cry their hearts out,
Heart-wrenching guttural cries,
While some just let out a few sobs,
In the memory of the ones that has gone,
Some could just stand and stare,
In utter denial, acting unaware,
Some could even laugh out loud,
Upon the cruel joke faith just played.
You see dear, there are many ways,
For people to express their grief,
Each have their one story,
Losing a loved one isn’t easy.
Just because they do it differently,
You don’t hold the right to judge.
Cause there’s no right way to mourn,
The death of someone you love.
Some could slit their own throat,
To reunite with the one that’s gone,
Some could cry for days and nights,
The melancholy swallowing them,
Some could act like nothings wrong,
Pretend the dead is still alive,
Some could turn to Jack Daniel’s,
Try and forget the fact so tragic.
Everyone deals with it differently,
And there’s no perfect way.
Topic by: Bharath
Featured image by: Mandy Fontana from Pixabay
This was amazing
I actually posted a Q&A post so I would be honored if you ask me some questions on that post
I will definitely dear. Also, so sorry for reading your new story… Things have been pretty hectic lately. 💕💕
It’s okay dear
You can take your time with it
You are most welcome
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I agree with Mohamad, this is an amazing post. One shouldn’t judge someone else just because they do something differently…
Thank you so much Lazarus! 💕💕🥰❣️ So glad you liked it. ❤️
A very unique idea to write on… you have quite aptly presented the various expressions of grief and gave a different outlook about them.Good job!😍💫
Thank you so much Chetna! I’m so glad you’re enjoying my works. Have a beautiful day. 💕💕💕
Great work❣️
Thank you mitty! 🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️
A brilliant topic and lines exploring every angle of the situation.
Loved it 😊
Thank you so much Vivek! 💕💕❣️❤️🥰
very well expressed
Thank you so much Era! 💕💕
most welcome 💙🤗
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Mourning is so important… and to do it correctly. . .
But is there a correct way to do it?
I guess the right way is acceptance. 🌷
But accepting isn’t easy… And many people can’t…
it is never, but I guess we can’t control somethings, we want to.. be happy always, but can’t. want to stay young, but can’t, want to stay healthy… but… you know there are many examples… but mostly If I see life gets meaning when we have all these up and downs in life.
If I cant control it, I try some ways.
If nothing works, got to accept.
acceptance isn’t easy,
if you made up your mind
and it is if can dare to decide.
decisions demand actions
actions want enthusiasm
and without that my friend
life is miserable to live.
Trueee… You are a really budhiman person. 😬
😅😂😂😂tang khichai kr rhi
Nahi nahi… Hum aap ke Tang Kyu khichenge? 🤪
hupp
Nup!
I think you need to give yourself a safe space to totally let it all out. and realize that this will just be for a time. and eventually you have to get over it
Maybe… 😭😭😭😭
Truly amazing topic by Bharath, and you carried it so well indeed. It’s really expressed in good ways.
Some could cry for days and nights,
Some could act like nothings wrong,
indeed 👌👌
Thank you so much Rishabh! ❤️❤️❣️❣️💕💕💕🥰🥰🥰❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
welcome buddy 💐
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Wow, that’s really awesome poetry. Keep it up.
Thanks a million dear. 🙈🙈🤗❣️💕
My utmost pleasure 💖🤗
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Stay well
You too dear 💕
Thanks
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My my! I’m so proud of you, girl!
All thanks to you, for such a happy topic! 🤪
You know what I like. 😂
Maybe… 😝😝
What else can be expected from him😅 such a happy topic.
Now coming to your poem…
Amazing Shreya…I don’t know how you do this. 😍
Sometimes I don’t get any appropriate word to praise your work.💙💙
Haha Anushka… I’m out of ways to thank you! 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗❣️❣️❣️❤️❤️💕💕
As I have already told you….you don’t have to😊💕
And you don’t have to find words to praise … The simple fact that you’re reading makes me feel so so so happy. You’re such an awesome person! ❣️
Not as amazing as you Shreya 😊💕✨ you are love.
Let’s agree to disagree! 🤪 I’m horrible at taking appreciate too. 🙈🙈🙈
Incredibly beautiful. Keep it up! ☀️😊
Thank you so much Roser! ❣️❣️❣️❤️💕🥰
amazingly expressed
Thank you so much Ankush! 💕
Wonderful
Thank you so much Haroon! 💕
You’re welcome
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There’s no right way to mourn. Losing a loved one can be hard, really hard. Beautifully written, Shreya! ♥️
Thank you so much Shweta. I’m really happy you liked it. ❣️❣️💕💕🙈🙈🙈🥰🥰
My pleasure, Shreya. ❤️🤗
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This is simply beautiful, Shreya….another strong & beautiful message….in such an artistic form…a reminder…there’s no right…there’s no wrong…you’re crazy talented….send me your autograph….by that, I mean your love ❤️🔥
Thank you so much Navin. This means a lot to me. Especially coming from you. When I read your poems, I don’t even have words to say how awesome you are. 🙈🙈🙈🥰💕💕😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❣️❣️❣️ Thank you so so so very much!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
You are too kind…kinda one of a kind…but don’t you hide behind…the compliments you’ve been giving on my writings…I’m though humbled & deeply thankful, if you think of me high…I’m simply being me, trying to look into my own eyes ❤️🤗✨💖
Your eyes look wise! 😬
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beautiful and moving…there is no right or wrong way for grief for it comes from a place that is true.
Thanks a lot dear. I’m so glad you liked it. 🙈🙈🥰🥰🥰🥰💕
The correct way to mourn is how the individual wants to. Different individuals, different ways.
Beautifully expressed!
Thank you so much Harsh! I’m so glad you liked it. How have you been?
Okay, I guess. More bored lately, and don’t feel to do anything.
How about you?
Same here Harsh. All I want to do is sleep! 🤪😴😴😴
Me too. But I feel sleepy in the mornings, and it is the time to wake up😂
Haha… Me too! 😬😬
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, love your work! I’ve written poems with similar styles in the past, but I never knew what style it was called. Do you have any idea what genre this type of poem writing might be?
I don’t know, maybe free verse… Thank you so much for dropping by and appreciating my works. Loads of love to you. Keep writing! 💕💕💕💕
Such a lovely one, pretty soul!👌👌 Much love!❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much dear! ❣️❣️❣️💕💕💕💕
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Awww! I’m feeling bad for this tiny one!
Haha… 🤪🤪💕💕💕💕❣️❤️
Hehehehe….
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A very touching and moving post..!
Thank you so much Piyush! 💕
lovely
Thank you so much dear! 🙈🥰🥰💕❣️❤️
I can’t get enough of your poems. I really like everything you’ve posted.
Thank you so much dear. I really hope to keep creating stuff you like. 🙈🙈🙈🥰🥰