“I’ll fade slow,” you promised,
And that sliced my heart in two.
It felt like you pulled a bow,
And the sharpest arrow pierced my core.
While lies are sour and truth bitter,
This honesty of yours has me shaken.
Don’t take me wrong dear friend,
I truly appreciate the upfront truth.
Dear friend, I don’t need your mercy,
Don’t fade slow, just go.
I don’t think I can ever bear,
Losing you in bits in pieces.
So, sever the ties and fly high,
I wish you all the joy.
And if you want to return,
My heart stays open.
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This was a true masterpiece!!
It’s full of emotions and love and it was so passionate
Way to go
Thank you so much dear. Your appreciations always make me so very happy! 🙈🙈😘😘😘
Aww you are most welcome dear
You are so talented and amazing
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So much appreciation… I’m blushing now! 🙈🙈😂
You are more than welcome my dear
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Hahahah! You decided to Post this now??
Haha… Laziness hit me! 🤪
Don’t imitate my laziness please
You dipped me in your laziness so badly, now I’m lazier than you!
You better get out of it. Ispe sirf mera haq hai.
Haha… Try to get me out of it. I dare you. 😝😝😝
Don’t challenge me. 😏
I just did! 😬
Wait for it.
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Beautiful
Thank you so much! 💕
That was so endearing and loving, but sad. I can feel your pain and loss. Thank you for sharing it with us. 🙂
Thank you so much dear! I’m really happy you liked it. Sending you loads of love! ❣️💕
Ahh thank you Heart. I appreciate that, and you’re welcome. Take care and stay safe and healthy. 🙂
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Good post Shreya.
I thought you wanted her to go unless in the last line you said you’ll wait for her if she wants to return.
You did Poetic Justice here..
Sending love to a poetic genius🤗🤗♥️♥️
Your comments always make my heart warm Rashmi! 💕❣️ Thank you so much! 🤗🤗😘😘😘💕💕❣️❣️❣️❤️❤️
Masterpiece overthere!
Thank you so much!! 🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘😘
Nice poem 😊
Thank you so much Era. Sending you loads of love! ❤️❤️❤️
Stay safe and stay healthy 💙
You too stay safe and healthy! Take care. 🤗🤗😘😘💕💕💖💖
Wonderful piece!! Reminded me of my bestie, since we haven’t spoken for long and reading your poem felt like it was us drifting apart.
Wonderful post!!👍👍
Thank you so much dear. I’m so glad you could relate it this, and I hope you guys don’t drift apart. Much love. 🤗🤗😘😘❣️❣️💕💕❤️
Thnx for your lovely wishes. Stay safe💕💕😊😊
You too stay safe! Take care. 💕💕💖💖
That was…. Powerful! Sad also.
Seriously, I’m getting curious now, how are you not a celebrity yet???? 😃 🤗😅💕
Haha … Thank you so much! This is over the top flattery! 😝😝😝🙈🙈😘😘
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Beautiful!
Thank you so much! 💕
You’re welcome. 💖
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A masterful and beautiful poem, Shreya! There is such devotion and love wrapped in the pain of anticipated loss. The strong emotions you provoke are unavoidable. It is amazing to watch your talent grow and be appreciated by so many people. So proud of you!!! As always, with much love! ❤❣🥰😘💕
Thank you so much Brad. Every comment of yours is such a strong push in my creative journey. You’ve been such an amazing support. Loads and loads of love to you! 🤗🤗😘😘❣️❣️❤️❤️💖💕
You never know when someone really fades away slowly!
Sadly! 😕😕😕
This was so beautiful. You did an amazing job expressing emotional turmoil in this poem. Loved it so much🌸
Thank you so much Kaylen. Have a beautiful day! 🤗🤗😘😘💕💕💖💖❤️❣️
Beautiful 😍
Thanks a lot Amartya! 🤗😘💕
It’s emotionally beautiful. Well penned one🤩👍
Thanks a million Tushara! So glad you liked it! 🙈🤗🤗😘😘💖💖
This is really lovely. Thank You. 🙂
I’m so glad you liked it! 🙈🙈🙈🤗😘😘💕💖
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This was so well written! Keep it up 💜💜
Thanks a lot dear. So glad you liked it! 🤗🤗😘😘💕💕💖💖❣️❤️
This is a very nicely written poem, touched my heart! Keep it up dear and take care!❤️
Thank you so much Ramyani! You’re appreciation means so much to me. I’ll definitely keep writing, I hope you keep reading. Sending you loads and loads of love! ❤️
Sure! Your blog is amazing! Do visit my blog too. Lots of love!Take care!❤️
I definitely will! 🤗🤗😘❣️💕💖
So sad, dear wild heart. I only hope he sees how wonderful you are. ❤🤗😘
Thank you so much Dave! 😬🤗😘 Don’t be sad, most of my poems are fictional. 😝🤪
Haha, that’s great! What an imagination you have! 👍😉
Thank you! 😬🤗😘😘❤️😉
I love how no matter what comments we make, they always turn into 😘😘🤗🤗💋💋
Haha… Cause we’re always filled with so much love… 🤪🤪
Haha, you know it, ❤
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Better to just rip the bandaid off quickly. . .
Yeah… 💔
Heartbreaks hurt so much. . .
Truly does!
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Don’t fade……………
Just go.
It got me.
I’m so glad it got you!! Thank you so much dear. I hope to keep writing posts that gets to you. Loads of love! 🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘😘❣️💕💖❤️
Amazing 😃
Thank you so much Abhishek! I’m really very happy that you liked it. 🙈🤗💕
Welcome 😇😇 😇
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Hey wildheart! why have you written this! In fact why did i read it! I don’t want to cry now, but i can’t escape from clutch of emotions now😢😢
I’m so so so sorry dear, I really didn’t want to make you cry. 🙈💔😭😭😭😭
Sometimes ripping off a band-aid is so much better than slowing letting it peel apart
Truee! 💔😕
Truly beautiful and so relatable. May nothing fade the beauty of your words. I’m glad I came across your blog.
Thank you so much Roshni. This means a lot to me!! So glad you liked it. Keep reading. 🤗🤗❤️💖
I can so much relate to it…..thx for sharing ❤️💙
I’m feel so sad that you could relate to this. I hope you’re okay. Take care dear. And thank you so much for your sweet comment! ❤️❤️❤️
I’m more than ok….it’s just your poem connects to people…at different levels
Thank you so much dear! ❤️❤️💖💖💕💕❣️❣️
Your word art is so exceptional and emotional, I have to limit my self to 2-3 posts a day, (if that is, I want to maintain control of my emotions throughout the day). Thank you yet again for another wonderful poem.
Your words give me tears of joy. Thank you so much!! You always bring a smile to my face. You’re such an amazing person. Have a super duper awesome day. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Thank you for your kind reply, I value your opinion more than the consensus opinion of those around me who think I’m a grizzly bear. heh heh
People think, people talk… And when you don’t like what they are saying, stick your tongue out at them and blehhhh 🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘♥️♥️♥️♥️
Heh heh, yes I know you are exactly correct. I love your clarity with truth, and I love the infusion of humor, it shows that, woven in among all your finer qualities, there is a grade A sense of humor.
Your combination of poise, class and wisdom prove why you are such an excellent role model for younger generations, and for those others of us, you are a wonderful example to either learn from, or be reminded of certain things. Thank you for your specialness.
Damn!! You always know how to make me feel like I’m flying in the air. Thank you so much! 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Sending you loads and loads of love. ♥️♥️♥️♥️😬😬♥️
Hmmm, yes, this is most uncanny and yet, wholly appropriate; “flying in the air” is the exact place I expect to find an angel.
This explains your awesomeness; you and your gift are literally divine in nature.
I don’t know why I didn’t see it before, but it makes so much sense. It is sooo clear to me now, and now that I have seen, I can’t unsee.
I used to doubt the existence of angels, but how can I now, with you as the best proof.
🙈🙈🙈🙈 awww… I don’t know what to say to this. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️