Up in the clouds I live,
Along with the birds I fly,
I wink at the twinkling stars,
As I twirl on the moon.
In my dreams I live,
Towards my goal I run.
“Be practical”, they say.
You’re destined to fail,
You’re on the dooms way.
Are you foolish or are you crazy?
Why don’t you understand?
Dreams don’t fill your tummy,
You’ll end up in road hungry.
Don’t be so impractical!
World doesn’t work that way.
“Be practical”, they say.
But there a flame in my heart,
And a vision in my mind.
Even when I’m directionless,
I’ve my destination in my mind,
I’ve dreams to accomplish.
So, I unhear all their fake concern.
“Be practical”, they say.
My attempt at Bop Poem. Inspiration: Whittled Words by Brad, as always!
Featured image by: Jansel Ferma from Pexels
love the last two lines. Written nicely. 🙂
Thank you so much Neha. 🤗🤗😘😘💕❣️
Hey.. its sneha 🙂
So sorry! 🙈🙈🙈🤗😘
Beautiful!❤️
Thanks a million Aishwarya! 💕❣️❤️🤗😘😘😘💖💕
A beautiful rendition of the form. Your words are powerful and the reconciliation of the last stanza is perfect. I hope this is just one more way for you to share all your beautiful words. Well done, Shreya! ❤😘🤗
Thank you so much Brad!! 🤗🤗😘😘😘💖💖💖💖❤️❣️
Great work as always Shreya ♥️
The last para was beautiful of all♥️
Thanks a million Rashmi! Sending you loads and loads of love! 🤗🤗😘😘💖❤️
Being practical doesn’t make you happy!
So true Harsh! 🤗🤗😘💕💖❣️
This absolutely blew my mind off
Loads of love to you dear
Thank you so much dear. So glad you liked it! 🤗🤗😘😘💕💕💖💖❤️
Most welcome
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Beautiful
Thank you so much Haroon! ❤️
You’re welcome
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Loved this one! A reminder to always do what makes you happy. Screw what the world thinks, follow your dreams💗🌸
So true! It’s the dreams that matter. Sending you loads of love. ❤️
How to be practical??
Bid goodbye to all you what to do and be a puppet. 😂😂😂
Sorry. No. 😂
No from me too! 🤪😂😂
It’s beautiful dear 😍 Cheers to Dreams ❤️❤️
Thank you so much Vivek! Cheers to dreams indeed. ❣️💖💕❤️
This is the combination of beautiful words… 👌❣️
Voice of my heart, thoughts of my mind 💕
Thank you so much aarzu. Really happy that you liked it. 🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘💖❣️💕❤️❤️❤️🥰
You’re most welcome dear 🤗 💕 😘 Stay blessed ❣️ ❤️ ❣️
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🙂 <3 🙂 <3
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Absolutely beautiful. 💕
Thank you so much dear. 🤗🤗🥰💕
My pleasure sweetheart 🌸💕
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Lovely Lines Well Penned Shreya. Loved it 🙂
Thank you so much dear. So glad you loved it. Sending you loads of love. 🤗🤗😘😘❣️❣️❤️❤️💕💕💕💖🙈
Aww thank you its my Pleasure Keep writing and Inspiring 🙂 🙂 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Another incredible stuff🤩 Shreya..
And this line..
Dreams don’t fill your tummy,
You’ll end up in road hungry.
Damn..!!❣️
Loved it to the core…
Amazingly written 😊💕
Thank you so so so much Anushka!! I’m so glad you liked it. Sadly, your favorite lines are not mine, it’s an English translation of what many of us told by everyone so often. 🤪😘😘😘💕💖❣️❤️
I got it earlier itself….😊but it’s England translation are sounding really great..😀
But …overall poem..is your creation…and it’s beautiful ❤️🤗
*English..
This autocorrect sucks sometimes😅
Yeahh, it should be renamed autoincorrect. 🤪😂😂😂
Yeah…😂
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Thank you so much Anushka!! You always know how to make me feel special. 🙈🙈😘😘😘💕💕💖💖
Pleasure is mine Shreya 🤗💕 you never fail to amaze me with your work ..
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Now, I felt what you meant that time ❣️🌼❣️
I’m glad you did! 💖
well it’s so interesting that how just today you came up with this post, God knows this mystery.
Magic 😝
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What… 😅
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What a beautiful piece of poetry, Shreya. You keep surprising me….
“I’ve dreams to accomplish. So, I unhear all their fake concern. “Be practical”, they say.”
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Thank you so much Navin. This means so much to me. 🙈🙈🥰🥰🤗😘😘😘💖❤️❣️
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I don’t think so I can be practical 😀
Me too! 😬
this hit home for me – so beautifully written, glad i found this blog 🙂
This means so much to me. I’m glad you found me too!! Thank you so much for dropping by. Sending you loads and loads of love. <3 <3 <3
Like!! I blog quite often and I genuinely thank you for your information. The article has truly peaked my interest.
Thank you so much, dear! <3