Sometimes I find myself staring
Staring at the void
Staring at nothing in particular
As millions of thoughts cloud my brain
To an extent I can’t comprehend.
Emotions pushing through me
And I just stay there staring
Not knowing what I am feeling
Insane voices echoing.
Sometimes I feel the pain,
Sometimes I feel the void,
Sometimes I feel my heart shrivelled,
Sometimes I feel cold as ice.
I often find myself questioning
From where is it all coming?
But I get no answer
And I just keep staring at the void
As millions of thoughts cloud my mind
To an extent I can’t even comprehend.
Beautiful write…
Thank you
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Amazingly written
Thank you so much ❤️
You are most welcome dear ❤️🌹❤️
Shreya, I am simply amazed at how your poetry has grown since I started following your blog. Your writing is colorful and evocative. The emotions and feelings you share are so easily accessible to the reader and there is a genuine quality that makes it feel like we are reading a private diary. Your willingness to explore unique perspectives, along with your lyrical forming of the poems, always leads somewhere interesting and beautiful! Keep being you and keep writing! ❤❣❤❣😘
Brad, the comments you leave always brings a wide grin on my face. Some days, I don’t even know how do I respond cause just a ‘Thank you’ would be too less. And I rarely know what more to say. You’ve been such an amazing support, always motivating me to keep writing. I’m so grateful to have known you. Loads of love to you. ❤️❤️❤️❣️❣️❣️😘😘😘
“Thank you” is more than is even needed. You should not feel compelled to write any response. I offer my words because I know that by writing and putting yourself out there, no writer is promised to be noticed, liked, or even appreciated. I do not want you to ever think that your writing is not valued, and in a small way, I want to help you to become the best writer you can be. Every word you write and share here is all the thanks I need. Love you, little one! ❤❣😘🥰🤗💕💖
I don’t compelled to write a response. Your sweet words send me into waves of euphoria, and I just want to explain it to you. But I don’t know how to do that, most of the times. 🙈😍😍💖💖💖❤️❤️❤️❤️
I think you explain it perfectly. And I feel your emotions any time you respond. But all I can do is love you back! ❣❤❣
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A beautiful writing my friend. Well penned 👌
Thank you so much Sadhak. 🤗❣️
It is relatable, staring at void is in vogue these days😶
You portrayed it Wonderfully ♥️
Haha Rashmi… If staring at void is the trend, then I’d be #1 trending!! 🤪🤪🤪 Wish you a beautiful day. Much love. ❤️
I do this too 🙄
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<3 <3 <3
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Sometimes as a writer we are in transition. We want to write, but we need to animate the story that is emerging but not 100% clear and to transform it into a living piece. It can be like waiting outside a cave of creativity and wondering whether it is safe to enter, filled with anticipation and even fear. That is what strikes me about the tone of your work here. There are some fun ways to enter that “creative place” if ever you might be interested in trying.
I’m always interested Xavier. Thank you so much. Tell me more about it. 😍😍😍🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘
#Same 100%
Beautiful written ❣️
Shreya 💕💕
Thank you so much aarzu! 💕💖
Pleasure is all mine 🤗 💕
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Very well expressed the plight of many!
Thanks a million Harsh. 💖💕
wow! This is so relatable! I really loved it! <3
Thanks a million dear. Sending you load and loads of love. 🤗🤗😂😘😘❣️💖❤️
Sending loads of love right back to you dear 🙌🏻💕❤️❤️🌸🌸💗💗
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This staring in void is so common to me in these days ….
And the feeling of emptiness…for no reason…
Beautifully written Shreya❤️
You again 💕💕left me speechless..
Lots of love ..🤗❣️
Your comments always leave me super giddy with happiness. Love you so much. 🤗🤗😘😘❣️❣️❤️❤️💖💖💕💕
And when I see your notification…it makes me super excited…that now a time for treat🤗❤️❤️
Much love to u too💕
Aww…. 🥰🥰🥰🥰 I feel so special! 🙈🙈🙈💕💕💕