Oh dear you!
Such a beautiful fruit,
As if you came,
From a fantasy world.
You belong to a place,
Where dragons are real,
Everything is surreal,
Your beauty is ethereal.
Your bright pink cover,
With spikes yellow,
Lets my imagination soar,
Into a world so mellow.
And oh yes, your spiky layers,
Just like amber flames,
Reminds me of spikes,
That run down a dragon’s spine.
Oh you, such beautiful fruit,
You’re exotic, even rare.
Just like it would be,
If dragons were real.
And when I cut through you,
And slice you into two,
It’s like I opening a portal,
To a different world.
Thousands of black seeds,
On your plush white flesh,
Just like the night skies would be,
In monochrome reversed.
And when I sink my teeth into you,
It’s pure bliss, an ecstasy.
Why do people do drugs,
When they could do you instead?!
For NaPoWriMo Day 24.
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<3 I believe you meant "Your beauty is ethereal" 🙂
Thank you so much for pointing out. 🙈🙈 I should have proofread before putting it up. 🙈🙈🙈😘💕
I can’t help but spot these things. I went to college to be an editor, but don’t feel bad–I make typos all the time. I’ve also learned that things look different online than they so in, say, MS Word, so it’s easy to make mistakes uploading. I do that all the time too. 🙂 You’re a good writer. We learn from our mistakes. None of us are infallible.
Thank you so much Charles. I really hope to spot these errors too. 🙈 Also, what did you study? Is there any course that helps us spot the typos better? 🙈🙈
I majored in literature & creative composition. As far as spotting errors, I learned a lot in our peer editing groups. But also, they always tell you to read your material aloud. People really rarely do this, but being visually handicapped, I have to use a text reader so I hear the mistakes, which is why they want you read the material aloud. I find it to be even better than using a spell checker.
Thank you so much Charles. I’ll try not to be lazy and implement it. 🙈🤗😘😘
I wouldn’t say you were lazy. We just don’t think about it. When you read aloud, your focus is different. I think that’s why it’s easier to catch mistakes. I don’t always do it myself. <3
Thank you! 🤗❤️
But of course, you’re quite welcome. <3 For what it's worth, that's the only typo I've ever spotted in your writing since I started following you. 🙂
Hehe… I spotted one in my other poem in the morning. 🙈🙈 Today has been a typo day. 🤪🤗😬
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Would love to taste one fresh from a tree. . . hard to find here in the USA
It’s not very common in Nepal too. 😬
Maybe our latitudes are just too high 🙂
I suck at geography. I know what you’re talking about, but not exactly. 🤪🙈🤗😬
hahaha. Maybe we are too far from the equator to grow them. . . or Nepal is just too high
Yep. 😬🤗😘😘
*blushing*
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Why do people do drugs,
When they could do you instead?!
Such a beautiful thought haa.
Good work Shreya 👍
Thank you so much Rashmi. But we have to agree, that was a little too farfetched and exaggerated. 🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘 Anyways, where’s the fun without exaggeration? 🤪🤗😘😘😘💕❤️
I agree
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Good one….
Thank you so much Nabeela. Keep reading! Take care & stay safe. 🤗😘❤️
This was amazing
Thank you so much dear. ❤️😘
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Colourful…fruitful…tasty writing…with deeper meaning….
“And when I sink my teeth into you, It’s pure bliss, an ecstasy. Why do people do drugs, When they could do you instead?!”
Thank you so much Navin. It means so much to me that you liked it. Much love. 🤗😘💕❤️
You’re a fantastic writer…Keep writing…expressing yourself…Much love 😘❤️🤗✨
Thanks a million for constantly encouraging me. Loads of love to you. 🤗😘💕❤️❤️❤️
Much love dear Shreya 🤗😘❤️
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Wonderful
Thank you so much Haroon. 🤗💕😘
You’re welcome
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Amazing!!
Thank you so much Harsh. 🤗❤️💕😘
Beautiful, Shreya.
(Ok I’m out again)
I’ll believe it if the King says so. 🤪🙈
OMG so amazing!
Thank you so much Abhishek! 🙈🙈🤗😘😘😘
Even Dragon Fruit would never have thought about its beauty, outside and within. The entire praise for the fruit is amazing but I couldn’t move my eyes from the last two lines. Very well written, Shreya. Keep it up. What a perspective you’ve given us. Thank you so much for such wonderful writing. Happy blogging. K.
Thank you so much dear. Your words mean a lot to me. I’m really glad that you liked it and hope to keep creating content that interests you. Much love. Stay safe & take care. 🤗🤗😘❣️❤️
Thank you so much for such kind words of yours. You too stay home and be safe. Love and hugs. 🤗🤗❤️❤️
Love and hugs to you too! 🤗🤗😘😘❣️💕❤️💖
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Also looks like mouse droppings 🙄.
But a lovely poem, and fruit, by the sounds of it!
Never thought of it that way. Lol. Thanks. 🤪🤗😘💕
😆, haha, sorry! Hope I haven’t ruined dragon fruits for you! 😉🤗
You haven’t. Not yet! 🤪😬😬
Oh my God Shreya 😀💞
Your writing is is unbelievable….you chase your limits…💙😊
This is so good..!!♥️
And the last stanza…it amazed me…🤩
Thank you so much Anushka. 🙈🙈🙈 I’m not really good at taking compliments. I really don’t know how to reply. This means so much to me. Love you so much. ❤️
Hehe…it’s completely okay…same pinch on this…😊
Keep writing ❣️🤗
Hope to keep you interested. 🙈🤗❣️
This was cool move Shreya, dragon fruit is really rare.. and so much to write about… 🤭🌼🌼❣️❣️🙈
Hehe… Thank you so much Rishabh. But I wish I could have put in some information too like you did with Mulberry. You did a stunning job! 🔥🔥🔥
better luck next time, you are a fast learner as always, will get it so soon…
Hope so… 🙈
don’t try to dumb me 😜
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just kidding
I know 🤗😘
yes, as I noticed in last stanza… full of complications 😅,such time can make us think that… be aware.. take care. 🤭🤭
Haha… That was intended double meaning. 🤪🙈😂🤣
I know that 🤭😂😂
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Yum I ❤️ Dragonfruit
Great writing ✍️
Thank you so much dear. I’m glad you liked it. 🤗❣️💕😘
I want this fruiiiit. Your writing is yummy😛❤️
Thank you so much Ayush! This means a lot to me. 🤗😘❣️❤️
Pleasure! 😇
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I have to agree with Blahblahblah on this one. And with you. Why do that, when you could be “doing the dragonfruit”? Does that sound like a new dance, maybe?
Haha… Maybe… Idk… 🤪🙈🙈🙈😘😘😘❣️❤️
Oh my gosh, I LOVE dragonfruit and this poem!!!
‘Why do people do drugs,
When they could do you instead?!’, EXACTLY! Perfectly worded and ever so beautiful 💖 💖 💖
Thank you so much dear. This means a lot to me. Also, I read your book’s sample, which was just one poem. 😬 I’m planning on buying it. But I just quit my job, so postponing it until I get a new job. 🤪🙈🙈 I’m really looking forward to reading the entire book. Much love. ❤️😘😘😘
Your welcome 😊, I do wish I could give you a free copy, but Amazon only allows me to do that every 90 days 😬I do hope you get a new, brilliant job and I hope you become successful in whatever you do 💕 💕 💕
Maybe you can publish an ebook of your poetry on Amazon? It’s free and i will definitely read it. Just a suggestion☺️
All the best and stay safe ❤️
H.R Phoenix 💖 💖 💖
Thank you so much dear!! 🙈🙈🤗💕😘❣️❤️
Your welcome 😊 💕
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So awesome!
Thank you so much John. ❤️🤗😘
I loved this, Shreya! It is beautiful to watch you stretch and strengthen your writing. I could leave a million kind words, but it would appear your readers have taken care of that. Well done, my friend! ❤😘
Thank you so much Brad. 🙈🤗😘💕❣️Sending you loads and loads of love. 😘❤️❣️
That fruit is truly magical looking 😍
It indeed is. 🤗😘❣️❤️
Very creative 😀😀!!
Thank you so much dear. 🤗😘❤️❣️💕
Draginfruit are so interesting!! I really enjoy your thoughts!
Thank you so much dear. Your appreciation means so much to me. I hope to keep creating content that you enjoy. Much love. 🤗😘❣️💕❤️
Wonderful 🔥🙌💙
Thank you so much! 🤗💕❣️❤️😘
Do follow me on Instagram @samvedna.raj
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Such a lovely poem. You did an amazing job showing the beauty of this fruit. I’ve never had one before tho. What do they taste like??
It’s fleshy like Kiwi, and the seeds have the same texture like that of Kiwi. And it’s sweet, but not very sweet. 😬🙈
Interesting. I definitely want to try one now.
Hehe. It’s a yum fruit. 😋
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Why are your poems so dope, Wild heart, and extraordinarily popular? Just wonderful! ❤
It’s dope, cause you are reading it. 😉😉😘❤️
Mmmm… 🥰 wild thing… 😘💋
Hmm…🙈 Gentleman… 😘💋
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Mmm, I so enjoy our emoji make-outs. 🤣😘😘💋💋
Your emojis make me go 🙈🙈🙈 in real! 🤪😘😘😘🤗
Haha, you are so cute, wild heart! 😂 💋😋😋💋
And you’re so amazing Dave! 🤗🤗😘💋❣️
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Beautifully written piece! ❤️
Thank you so much Eugenia! 🤗😘❤️❤️❤️
Hi Wildheart. So on the advertising, is it okay if I put in this line as a sample:
‘Lets my imagination soar,
Into a world so mellow.’?
and on the poster?
It’s beautiful dear. ❣️💖💕💕 Thank you so much ❤️ 🤗😘😘😘😘😘
Your welcome 😊 😊 😊
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Awesome written piece! Dragon fruits are really from a fantasy world!
Thank you so much dear. Dragon fruits are indeed fascinating… 😍😍😍🤗💕💖❣️❤️
Damn..that’s a beautiful depiction. Loved it.💜
Thanks a million Saumya! So glad you loved it! ❤️❤️❤️
My pleasure!🥰
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