Thousands and millions, of excuse I make,
Just to steal some moments with you.
I look into your eyes, your beautiful browns,
And pour my heart out to you.
I spend my days writing poems and letters,
All glorifying how amazing you are.
Your deep hoarse voice, so sweet to my ears.
And when I hold your hands, I feel a fire ignite.
So, place your delicate, soft lips on mine,
Make me yours, now in this moment.
But please don’t promise a forever together,
This is just pure lust, not love!
For NaPoWriMo Day 15.
Inspiration: Gulabi
Just when I thought this was cute. 😂
😝😅🤪 Confusing things happen. 😝
Surprising actually.
You used my own words against me, eh? Smartypants. 😂
Yep! King’s words. 😝
Lady’s sarcasm. 😂
😝😝🤪
The ending 🙃
🙈🤗🤗
I just didn’t see it coming. Still nice!
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it. ❣️❤️
You got the ending right! No forevers ever!
Haha. Thank you so much 💕 🤗😘
“Thousands and millions, of excuse I make,”
Haha, I love that 😄. This was a nice poem 🙂.
Thank you so much Robin. ❤️💕🤗🤗😘😘
I spend my days writing poems and letters,
All glorifying how amazing you are.
This is so true💛
I’m so glad you could relate. ❤️💕😘😘😘
I liked your poem. It was very real in how we interact with each other when love is involved. Thank you for sharing. :/
Thank you so much chicky! Your appreciation means a lot to me. And I’m glad you liked it. 🙈🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘
Love it, promises not included but everything is. 😃
Thank you so much dear. I’m so glad you love it. ❤️
Beautifully written
Thank you so much dear! 💕💕🤗😘
Haha.. And the tables turned around at the last line. Brilliant
Thank you so much! Your appreciation keeps me motivated. I’m happy that you liked it. ❣️❤️🤗🤗😘😘
The ending was unexpected
But it was fascinating
It’s really nice to have someone who writes about love
Thank you so much dear! I’m so glad you liked it. ❤️❣️😘😘🤗🤗😘😘
Absolutely
It’s because some people including me find it difficult to share their feelings with someone
I haven’t told my parents yet that I have a crush
It’s kinda hars
I haven’t told my parents I have a boyfriend. Seems like we’re on the same page! 😅 🤗❣️
Yeah I guess
It’s just that I haven’t even told my crush that I like her
It’s just hard for me to tell her that
If you don’t tell her, someone else will. And you can write sad poems! 💔💔 So, don’t waste time and tell her. ❣️
I guess you’re right
I never thought of it that way
It’s just because some parents in our tradition don’t accept it
But I think you are right
Thank you very dear for giving me this wonderful advice
☺️☺️🌹
The guy I love isn’t even from my country. I’m gonna have a tough time convincing my parents. 🤣🤣 Wish you all the best. ❣️
Thank you very much dear
Same to you too
She’s actually in the same class i attend
And the only reason I miss school is because I want to see her
Because i had a tough time having good friends and she was super kind and nice to me
Thank you very much for sharing your time
I hope you and her get a beautiful happily ever after .❣️💕💕
Oh dear
Thank you very much
You really are a wonderful friend
Thank you for your time
❤️
❤️💕💕🤗😘
it was really really good, first time I got to hear some that language song, it really fits perfect with the rhymes. Beautiful readily. ❣️💕
Thank you so much!! I’m so glad you liked it. ❣️🤗🤗😘
well you are already know you are amazing
Haha! 🙈🙈🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘
😅are bs bs bacha k rkho 💛🤪
Kyu?
kisi ki amanat, kisi ko nhi dete…
vada krte hai…. hr kisi ko nhi dekhte
yu to dost honge kai… in raho me
yu to dost honge kai… in raho me
pr dosti ki vo had… hr kisi pe munasib
hm nhi samajhte💕
Haha. 😍❣️❣️❣️💕
This is beautiful ❣️
good child 💛🤪🤗
😬💛❤️😘
Lovely and surprising
Thank you so much! ❣️💕
You’re welcome
P
❤️
Paradoxical poem! As sweet as you are!
Awww… You’re so sweet!! Thank you so much! 🙈🙈💕💕😘😘😘🤗🤗🤗
💕
Nice post.
Thank you so much! ❤️❣️💕
Well written, Shreya! Your descriptive phrasing builds the anticipation for the reader, and your closing forces them to think past accepted outcomes or thinking. And all this held in the moment of one kiss. So proud of you!
Thank you so much Brad. You keep pushing me to write better. 🙈🙈❣️❣️🤗🤗😘
❤💕😘🥰🤗
❤️
Lovely words ❣️❤️❣️
Thanks a million aarzu ❣️💞🤗😘
My pleasure dear 🤗 💕😘
💕
Have you tried your hand at sonnets? I’m quite confident you would be amazing at those… I love your twists – every time. As for ‘this’ being lust – I think I know something about that. Check my story starting with #One to know what I mean. 🙂
Thank you so much Ben! I think I should give it a try. And about your spidy series, I’ve read it dear and loved it. ❣️🤗🤗😘😘😘
As I love reading your poetry…
🙈🤗😘😘❣️
<3
🖤
Love is the word I loved so much 🙂
Your comment is a poetry in itself Athira! ❤️
Its comes automatically after I read yours 🙂
Now I don’t know what to say. 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘
🙂👍🙂
❤️
Saying no when your gut says to go
I don’t know what to say. 🤪
haha. Put it in the back of your head for now, but I’m open to collab’ing on a poem sometime 😉
I’m all in! 😍
Gee, that was easy!
🤗🤗🤗💕
great, thank you LOL
I would love to write about the fragrance of chai but I know you’re more into coffee. Maybe we can write a funny comparison of the two
Sure! So when?
I’ll get in touch with you . . .
I’ll be waiting 💕
OK I sent it to you. Or if you just have a gmail account you want to send me.
I didn’t get it. Could you please email me @ shreyajoshi0001@gmail.com ?
All set
Now is the time… True.
Indeed! ❣️
To ravish the rose with lust is why thorns grew, to lessen the touch….Beautiful expression of honesty in this confession…LOL. Your writing is very engaging…much love
Thank you so much Willow! I’m glad you like it. ❤️🤗🤗😘😘
You’re an amazing writer, Shreya. The more I read, the more I love your writings. This is pure love towards your work….not lust 😉❤️
Haha! Thank you so much dear. I adore your works too. In fact, I envy the way you weave words. 🙈🤗🤗😘
That’s so kind of you ❤️
Just being honest dear. 🤗😘
🙏❤️😘
❤️
Well penned 👌
Thank you so much Sadhak. I’m so glad you liked it. I’m a fan of your works. 🙈🤗🤗😘
It’s my pleasure to listen these words. But I love to write in hindi. My english is not as great as yours. If you could understand hindi you feel my words.
I read hindi! 🤗😘😘 And your English translations are brilliant too. 💕
हार्दिक आभार बंधु आपका आशा करता हूँ आपको और भी अच्छी कविताओं का संग्रह अवश्य प्राप्त होगा। वैसे मेरी अंग्रेजी थोड़ी कमजोर है। 🙏
🙈🤗🤗🤗😘
While I was so caught up in this all the way, the end felt like a blow in the face🤒
Thank you so much for dropping by. I really didn’t mean to give a blow in your face, just was portraying what life does to us time and again. I hope you enjoyed it. Much love. ❤️🤗😘
Ha I get it now, we all get that at some point, don’t we?
Yep! 😬🤗🤗😘😘💕
lol
😬
https://youtu.be/mRTVxlkGunM
❤️
Eye opening.
Love you ❤️
HIIII! Please check out my blog about love and emotions! Thanks!
https://batanghilaga.wordpress.com/2020/04/16/all-we-need-is/
You have an amazing blog. Much love. 🤗😘😘💕💕❣️
Love this!! Keep on loving 🙂
Thank you so much dear. I’m so happy you liked it. Check out my other works too. Much love. 🤗😘❣️❤️
Well written! Keep sharing more 🙂
Thank you so much dear. Keep reading! Sending you loads of love! 🤗💕💖❤️❣️😘😘😘
Nice twist at the end. Seemed like a real love story until the end.
Thank you so much Joseph! ❤️❤️❤️❣️ Really glad you liked it! 🤗💕💖
You write so well. Congratulations!
Thank you so much dear. So glad you like it. Keep reading! 💖💖
I follow you✌️-You write well! Keep on writing dear!
Thank you so much! 🙈🙈🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Welcome dear🙏
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Unexpected ending xD But lovely nevertheless. 🙂
Thanks a lot Ivana! 💕💕❤️❤️❣️
Damn beautiful post! Just what I needed to amp myself up!
Thanks a million Rahul! So glad you liked it. 🙈🙈❣️❤️❤️❤️💕
So lovely. We would like to feature you in this coming week’s “This Just In… Undead Bride.”
Thank you so much, dear. It would be an honor!
Here is the link you were featured in. Thank you for being a part of our adventure. https://flatlinerbooks.wordpress.com/2020/05/21/this-just-in-undead-bride/
Beautiful
Thank you so much, dear! ❤️
Very nice …
Thank you so much, Saroona! 💕
https://writerairy.wordpress.com/
Interesting twist….loooove it
Thank you so much dear!! <3 <3 <3 So glad you liked it! <3
Such a beautiful piece! please have a look at my blog as well <3
Thank you! I’ll definitely check it out.