I stole your mommy and daddy,
All their love and affection,
Your place in the family,
And all that should have been yours.
I stole your tiny little crib,
And all the onesies bought for you,
All the cute cuddly toys,
I stole everything from you.
The money saved for your education,
It’s for my college now.
Your home, your family, your life,
It’s all mine now.
Dear brother, I never got to meet,
I don’t apologise for stealing,
But I’d rather share everything,
And steal your heart instead.
For NaPoWriMo Day 13, a non-apology for some things you’ve stolen. Before you send me your condolences, this is purely fictional.
Lovely.
Thank you so much Tanya. 💕🥰
You’re welcome, keep writing.
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Nice piece 💗
Thank you Matt. 💕🥰❣️
Nice Shreya 💕👌
Thank you so much Rishabh ❣️
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Now this is tricky. Is it fiction?
Yep!
Your fiction scares me. 😅
Why?
Every time I read something like this, I hope it isn’t real. 😂
You’re a kind soul! 💕
Thanks 😊
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Really nice.
Thank you so much Ishaan. And I’m so sorry I didn’t see it earlier. There has been some issue with my notification system. Your appreciation truly means a lot to me. Thank you so much. ❤️
You’re welcome. I understand, WordPress has many glitches.
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Except for the last part, this could be read as a text from a younger to an older sibling, where the parents failed to realise the older continued needing attention after the birth of the younger one…
True! It happens. Younger child is indeed more fragile and needs more attention, but negligenting the elder child isn’t fair.
It isn’t, yet it happens all too often. Hence it takes two minds to parent siblings. One root tend to the weak in need, and one to keep track of the balance…
So true! ❣️
You are finding your voice, Shreya! It is a good sign when you must tell your readers your work is fiction. It means your words are connecting on an emotional level and ring true to what your are imagining. The truest art in poetry is connecting with, describing, and sharing feelings and emotions you may have never had, but can readily feel and sense by putting yourself in another’s mind and heart. Well written! You should be proud! ❤
Thank you so much Brad. You keep pushing me forward on this journey with you kind words and appreciation. Much love. ❣️💕💕💞🤗🤗
Before you disclosed it was for brother, I could sense it would be for him.
It was a post from heart and the way it ended it took my heart…..❤️❤️
Thank you so much Rashmi! 💞💕❣️
Superb ❣️
Thank you aarzu ❣️
Most welcome 💕
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Lovely loaded with beautiful emotions
Thank you so much 💕
You’re welcome
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I’m sure a lot of older siblings feel that way about their younger siblings. I kinda felt that way with my younger siblings. They always got the best of things because of their age. I’m not bitter, promise! :\ Nice poem…
Haha… Nice. Thanks for stopping by. ❣️💕💞🤗🤗😘
Good.
Thank you so much dear 💞
Well done!
Thank you so much! ❤️🤗🤗😘😘😘💕💞
You are welcome, dear. ❤️🤗
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Nicely written..!
Thank you so much Piyush. ❣️
Excellent with respect to theme and selection of words. Loved it. 😍
Heartbreaking. Is this a true story?
Nope. True for so many people, but not me. Out of my imagination. 😬💔
OK, makes me feel a little better for your sake 😉
Thank you so much! 💞
My brother is still stealing so much from me! 😠 Lol, we’re best friends, luckily enough. But, we fight a lot, that’s just inevitable 😂
Haha, I understand and absolutely love this poem, Shreya. ❤️🤗
I’m so glad you could relate to this. Thank you so much! 💞💕💕❣️🤗
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Very well written!
Thank you so much dear. 🤗🤗💕💞
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Wow brilliantly written!
Thank you so much Nathi! Your compliments always leaves me motivated. 💞😘😘
Always my pleasure 🙂
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Congratulations, WildHeart!
I have nominated your blog for the Real Neat Blog Award.
More about this nomination is at
https://dearkitty1.wordpress.com/2020/04/13/real-neat-blog-award-congratulations-15-nominees-2/
Thank you so much dear. This means so much to me. And I’m so sorry I didn’t see it earlier. There has been some glitch with my notification system. Thank you so much. ❤️
Your welcome 💗💗💗
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Beautifully written!
Thank you so much dear. 🤗🤗😘
Absolutely stunning!
Thank you so much! 🙈🤗🤗🤗😘😘
This is wonderful.
Thanks a lot for nominating me for the real neat blog award. I have duly acknowledged your graciousness, a bit late though. regards
https://timelessmind.org/2020/05/11/real-neat-blog-award/
Thank you so much dear!!! I’m so glad you accepted it! 💕💕❣️❣️💖💖