Truly You!

Poetry, Writer life

Not perfect,
Just truly you.

Not trend,
Just your heart.

Your move,
Not to impress.

Your heart,
Just for yourself.

Believe me,
Are truly special.

Kill yourself,
Being someone else.

For NaPoWriMo Day 10. A Hay(na)ku.

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85 thoughts on “Truly You!

      1. I too find Haiku very complicated. This happens to be a very close and simple cousin of Haiku, known as Hay(na)ku. 😬😅

    1. Thank you so much Shweta!! Your appreciation means so much to me. And I’m so glad you love it. Take care, stay safe & be you! 💕💞Much love. ❣️

    1. Thank you so much dear! I’m really happy that you can relate to this. After all, what’s life when you’re trying to please everyone but yourself! ❤️❤️

    1. Thank you so much aarzu! And so sorry for not responding earlier. There has been some issue with my notification system. You appreciation truly means so much to me. Thank you so much. ❤️

  1. You have written to this form flawlessly! You have used the flow and form to highlight and empower the simple phrasing this form requires. Each stanza is powerful on its own, but together, they are woven in to a verse of true beauty! Well written, little one! ❤💕😘

    1. Thank you so much Brad!! Each time I read your comment, I get an amazing euphoric feeling, that make me wanna keep writing. 🙈🙈❣️💞💞💕

    1. That’s an amazing advice. But I think sometimes it’s okay to blurt it out. To say you’re confused and not confident, after all no one can always be confident. 😬😬❣️

      1. Oh ya. of course! But the world can be a hard place. So you need your own safe space to let out your weaknesses. But then you have to pull yourself together and be strong by the time your feet hit the street!

    1. And these are the words pushing me to keep writing. Thank you so much for reading, for appreciating and also for your amazing blog. Your poems inspire me. ❣️🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘

  2. Wonderful and hopeful words shared dear Poet. I agree. Old wise saying. “Better to walk the path unmarked and free of footprints. Seek the things you need, be part of our word, not controlled by her.”

    1. Thank you so much John. I’m so glad you liked it. And as person who has been following your blog for quiet some time, reading all the amazing poems by so many talented people, you reblogging this is such an honor. Thank you so much! ❣️❣️

  3. Pure words of wisdom….beautifully written….simplicity at its best….with great knowledge….touching the hearts….right away ❤️😘

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