Your intense gaze,
Set a fire to my soul.
The fiery flames of betrayal,
Shook me to my deepest core
And burnt me down to ashes.
Seeing her in your arms,
Set a storm in my heart.
The thunderstorm of pain
Spread all over my body
And shattered my heart to pieces.
As your lips reached hers,
I was out of air.
Drowning in your treachery
I suffocated haplessly
Until I could not feel anything.
To see you like that,
It killed me mercilessly.
As if you held a dagger
And plunged it to my heart
My life, slipping away.
Then your eyes met mine,
Your guilt-stricken eyes.
You can keep your reasons,
I’m walking away
I’m gonna see you, never again.
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Yet another beautiful poem !! Emotionally catastrophic and well phrased 👏👏🤝
Thank you so much. I’m glad you like it! ❣️
Love this 👏🏽
Thank you so much 💕
Intense
Thank you so much Haroon! ❣️
You are always welcome
Your portrayal of the pain is intense and real. The stanzas read like a story and pull the reader into the emotions. Sad, but beautifully written! One day, somebody worthy of your love will kiss those pains away!
Thank you so much Brad! Most of my poetry emerge from my imagination rather than real life experience. Tragedy hasn’t struck me that hard yet. I’m just drawn to tragic stuff. 🙈 And thank you so much for reading. Your comments are constant source of motivation and your poems are inspirations! ❣️
I made the common mistake of assuming you were speaking from experience. I am glad your heart has yet to know that pain personally. But yet you can master the emotions of a moment or situation and that is truly a gift. I, too, often write about experiences I have never had personally, but can imagine how someone might feel. I appreciate your kind words and hope that I will always be an inspiration for the beauty you create! Stay safe and much love to you! ❤😘💕
Thank you so much! Loads and loads of love to you too! 💕 Stay safe 🤗
Lovely one ❣️
Thank you aarzu ❣️
Wow, such an amazing writer you are. Could feel that pain. Just loved it.
Thank you so much Tanya 💕
My pleasure.
Beautiful and intense, dear! 💐
Thank you so much Aa’eedah!! 💕 I’m so glad you like it! ❣️
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What a beautiful piece. Really pulled at my heartstrings. <3
Thank you so much Liv!! I’m so happy you like it. 🥰
An emotionally powerful poem, thank you for this. And thank Eugi for sharing your work with us at the Go Dog GO Cafe this week.
Wow! Such a beautiful surprise. While I like putting everything in words, I’m speechless. Can’t find the right words to express how happy I am. Thank you Stephen. And thank you so much Eugi! Loads of love to the both of you and all the people who take time to read my works! ❣️
You are very welcome and there door to the cafe is always open to you and all your friends!
Thank you so much Stephen.
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Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much 💕💕💕💕💕💕
You’re welcome!! ❤️