Dear daddy, don’t expect,
Don’t tell me to be better than the rest.
I know how much you love me,
And you want only the best best for me.
But please Daddy for my sake,
Let me off this race.
I don’t want to chase success
I don’t want to rush ahead.
Dear daddy, let me walk,
Enjoying the breeze under the sun.
I’d rather savor the journey life,
Than win this never-ending rat race.
Daddy dearest, I’ve seen you run,
Towards success all your life.
You’ve devoted to it, all your time & effort
Could you spare some for me too?
Dear daddy, I miss you.
I’d like to enjoy life with you.
Daddy dearest, let’s take a break.
Let’s get out of this race.
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nice poem
Thank you so much Ishaan! 🥰💕💕
Welcome
Amazing dear 💖💖
Thanks a million Neha!
❤️
Soulful ❤
Thank you Yash!
Beautiful
Thank you so much Haroon!
Heartfelt❣
Thank you so much Ashish! ❣️
Touching
Thank you so much!! 💕
Welcome
Real fact, if they could have the eyes to see it that way, amazing piece.
Thank you so much! 💕💕
I can feel the crying out and the hidden pain in this piece. Beautifully expressed!
Thank you so much Brad❣️❣️❣️
Wonderful poem…keep writing
Thank you so much.
Great poem 💕
You are on the right path WildHeart. Yes your daddy loves you but he doesn’t know what he is doing. Walking is any day more fun than running 🏃♀️ We have to reach nowhere. Just Be 🤗
Thank you!
Pleasure. You have a beautiful heart. Stop being scared 😊
Beautiful poem…from your heart
…it reminded me of the old classic “papa don’t preach”…different “theme” though
Thank you so much Navin! ❣️
Great poetry 🌻
Thank you so much 💕
cool buddy///and it reminds the famous song o’papa dont preach me’
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Thank you so much!! Papa don’t preach is indeed such a beautiful song. And it’s so true, no matter how old we are, for our parents we’ll always stay a kid. And they are scared for us. ❣️
yes true……and nice writer you are..glad meeting u
Thank you so much 💕
wc adn blessed..fellow indian?
Nope. Nepali 🇳🇵
that’s k…neighbor…at Seeta is from Nepal only 🙂
Yep. And I was in India for past four years. 😅
cool…i never feel nepal as separate country…
But it is! 😅
haha..thats ok…nobody separate by drawing a line
There’s a line called ‘No man’s land’ dividing it
haha
Really? Check it out and visit Nepal. You won’t need a visa but you’ll need government recognized identity card or passport. 🙂
ya i know but im at the end of the largest country southern part
Chennai?
h 2 u knw
Magic ✨
yo magic girl… cool cool..
😅
This shows wisdom…
Thank you so much!! 🙈🙈🙈💞💞💞
Pleasure buddy
Beautiful. “Let me off this race.” My prayer for these days. Thank you.
Thank you so much dear. 🤗💖💕❤️
So true!
Thank you so much! ❤️
beautifully written! thank you for sharing👍🏽
Thank you so much, dear. So glad you liked it! <3